Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap doğrudan evet ile başlamış ama dilbilgisi ve akıcılık sorunları var. Geçmiş ve şimdiki zamanı tutarlı kullanmalı (liked → like), gereksiz tekrarlar ve kelime tekrarlarından kaçınmalı (spectacles views yanlış ve gereksiz). Ayrıca örneği daha öz ve doğal bir şekilde bağlam içinde sunmalı; bağlantı için bir bağlaç kullanılmalı (for example → for instance veya because ile net bağlama). Cümle sayısını 3-4 ile sınırlayıp daha spesifik ayrıntı eklemeli (hangi saat, ışık veya hava şartlarının fotoğrafı iyi yaptığını belirtmek gibi).

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For instance, when I was in London I took photos of Big Ben and the River Thames because the evening light created a great atmosphere for photography.

提案: Cevap açık ama zaman uyumsuzluğu ve tekrarlar var (preferred → prefer, I lived → I live veya I grew up). 'Used to' gereksiz tekrar ediyor; daha doğal ifade için nedeni kısa ve spesifik tut. Ayrıca bağlaç kullanarak gerekçe daha akıcı olur (because / as). 2-3 cümle ile sınırlı, şehirde hangi tür manzaraları çektiğini belirtirse içerik güçlenir.

例: I generally prefer urban areas because I grew up in a large metropolitan city and enjoy photographing its architecture and busy streets.

提案: Cevap niyet belirtse de dilbilgisi ve mantık bozuklukları var. 'I prefer in other countries' yerine 'I prefer views in other countries' demeli. 'I curious about what their local lives' yanlış yapı; doğru kullanım 'I'm curious about local life' olmalı. 'I generally want to unexpected photos' anlamsız; yerine 'I like to capture unexpected moments' gibi net bir ifade kullanılmalı. Cümleleri bağlaçlarla birleştirip 2-3 cümle yaparak daha tutarlı örnek verin.

例: I prefer views in other countries because I'm curious about local life, and I enjoy capturing unexpected moments that show how people live.

× Yes, I liked taking pictures of different views, spectacles views.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views, spectacular views.

The student used 'liked' which puts the action in the past; the question asks about a general preference in the present. Use simple present 'like'. Also 'spectacles views' is incorrect word choice and form — use the adjective 'spectacular' to describe views. Suggestion: use present tense for general preferences and choose correct adjective forms.

× For example, when I was in London, I really liked the iconic sites like Big Ben and the River Thames because their atmosphere looks looked great.

✓ For example, when I was in London, I really liked the iconic sites like Big Ben and the River Thames because their atmosphere looked great.

The clause begins with a past time marker 'when I was in London', so the verbs should be in the past. The sentence incorrectly mixes present 'looks' and past 'looked'; keep past 'looked'. Also 'their atmosphere' is acceptable but could be 'the atmosphere' for clarity. Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense for events tied to a past time.

× I generally preferred urban areas because I lived a really big metropolitan city and I used to take pictures in my city.

✓ I generally prefer urban areas because I live in a really big metropolitan city and I usually take pictures in my city.

The question asks about a general preference (present), so use present tense 'prefer' and 'live'. 'Used to' implies a past habitual action that no longer occurs; use 'usually' for present habitual actions. Also preposition: 'live in a city' not 'lived a city'. Suggestion: use simple present for ongoing states and correct prepositions.

× I generally preferred urban areas because I lived a really big metropolitan city and I used to take pictures in my city.

✓ I generally prefer urban areas because I live in a really big metropolitan city and I usually take pictures in my city.

The original uses 'lived a really big metropolitan city' which is missing the preposition 'in'. Correct phrase is 'live in a city'. Also 'in my city' is fine. Suggestion: remember 'live in' for inhabited places.

× I prefer in other countries because I curious about what their local lives I generally want to unexpected photos.

✓ I prefer other countries because I am curious about local life there and I generally want unexpected photos.

'Prefer' should be followed directly by the object 'other countries', not 'in other countries'. The sentence lacks the verb 'am' in 'I curious', so use 'I am curious'. 'Their local lives' is awkward; use 'local life there'. Word order and articles: 'I generally want unexpected photos' is acceptable but 'want to take unexpected photos' is clearer. Suggestion: use correct verb 'to be' forms, proper object placement after prefer, and complete verb phrases like 'want to take'.