Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答总体清晰但有几处语法和表达不够自然。应直接开门见山表明喜好（主题句），然后用一到两句具体细节支持，并用连接词保证衔接。注意时态和主谓一致（e.g. "fit" 应为 "fit" 对复数或搭配，应改为 "fit" 与主语一致）。可以替换口语化或冗长片段，使语言更地道。

例: I don't usually take photos of views. However, when a scene looks particularly striking or matches my mood, I will photograph it and share it on my WeChat Moments to remember the moment and get feedback from friends.

提案: 回答表意清楚但存在逻辑和内容矛盾（城市景观与“慢生活”通常不搭配），且句子较长可拆分成主题句加支持句。使用连接词（e.g. "because", "so", "although"）更清晰。提供更具体原因或比较可以增强说服力。

例: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the convenience and cultural activities in the city. Although city life can be stressful, I appreciate peaceful neighborhoods and cafés where I can relax, so I would like to live there for a year to experience that lifestyle.

提案: 回答逻辑明确，内容具体但可更紧凑。先给出明确立场，再用具体例子或比较支持（比如举一两个本国景点与外国景点对比）。避免模糊词汇如 “some” 过多使用，改用更具体的描述。

例: I mostly prefer views in my own country because we have diverse landscapes, from deserts to oceans, which I find beautiful. However, seeing scenic photos from abroad on social media sometimes inspires me to visit those places as well, like the fjords in Norway or cherry blossoms in Japan.

× No, I don't often take photos of views, but sometimes if the views are looking amazing and fits my mood at the time, I would take pictures of them and post them on my social media, especially on my WeChat moments.

✓ No, I don't often take photos of views, but sometimes if the views look amazing and fit my mood at the time, I would take pictures of them and post them on my social media, especially on my WeChat moments.

主谓一致错误：从句中主语是复数“the views”，谓语应使用复数形式“look”与“fit”，原句用了“is looking”或“looking”和“fits”造成主谓不一致。建议：复数主语用复数动词（一般现在时），避免不必要的进行时，用“look”和“fit”。

× Well, nowadays because of the stress I'm getting from my work, I prefer the views in urban areas and if I have a chance, I would like to live in an urban area for a year to relax and to enjoy the slow lifestyle.

✓ Well, nowadays because of the stress I get from my work, I prefer the views in urban areas and if I have a chance, I would like to live in an urban area for a year to relax and enjoy the slow lifestyle.

时态和结构问题：短语“the stress I'm getting from my work”在此处更自然应使用一般现在时“the stress I get”，表示经常性的状态。另外，不需要重复不定式“to enjoy”，与前面的“to relax”并列时通常省略第二个“to”。建议：用一般现在时描述习惯或经常发生的情况，平行结构中保持简洁。

× Well, I think there are magnificent views in my country, varying from deserts to oceans, but sometimes when I see some views of other countries on social media, I would definitely have the urge to see them.

✓ Well, I think there are magnificent views in my country, ranging from deserts to oceans, but sometimes when I see views of other countries on social media, I definitely have the urge to see them.

时态与表达简化：将“varying from”改为更常用的“ranging from”更自然；“see some views”中“some”可删以提高流畅性；“I would definitely have the urge”中用一般现在或现在时“I definitely have the urge”更符合条件事实（看到照片时的即时感受）。建议：使用更自然的固定搭配（ranging from），避免不必要的词语，并在陈述普遍或即时感受时使用一般现在时。