Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct verb forms and avoid repetition. Add one supporting detail with a linking word. For example, mention what kinds of views you like and why.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I usually use my iPhone to photograph landscapes and city scenes because I like capturing interesting light and colors. For example, when I travel I often stop at viewpoints to take several shots.

提案: Answer directly and avoid repetition. Use correct grammar (plural/singular agreement, verb forms) and add a reason with a linking word. Be specific about what attracts you in rural areas.

例: I prefer views in rural areas because they have a peaceful, natural atmosphere and very little pollution. For example, I enjoy photographing fields, forests and small villages where the scenery feels more authentic and calming.

提案: Give a clear direct answer and correct grammar (countable nouns, articles, plural forms). Provide a specific reason and an example of a place and what you would photograph there. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

例: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer different architecture and landscapes than my home country. For instance, I would like to photograph the modern skyline of Dubai or the varied landscapes in the USA, such as coastlines and national parks, to add variety to my photo collection.

× Yes, I like to capture photos in my iPhone and I always do that whenever I going I'm going to outside.

✓ Yes, I like to capture photos on my iPhone and I always do that whenever I go outside.

The sentence has incorrect verb forms and prepositions. 'Capture' after 'like' is acceptable as infinitive, but 'on my iPhone' is the correct preposition for devices. The phrase 'whenever I going I'm going to outside' mixes forms; use simple present 'I go outside' after 'whenever'. Remove redundant 'I'm going to'. Use 'go outside' not 'go to outside'. Suggested improvement: Use 'whenever I go outside' and 'on my iPhone'.

× I always prefer views in rural rural areas because it has a natural atmosphere and almost 0 pollution so I like I like to going to rural areas or rural areas.

✓ I always prefer views in rural areas because they have a natural atmosphere and almost no pollution, so I like going to rural areas.

Errors include duplicate word 'rural', singular/plural disagreement ('it has' referring to 'areas' should be 'they have'), incorrect quantifier 'almost 0 pollution' should be 'almost no pollution', and incorrect verb form 'to going' should be 'going'. Suggestions: remove duplicate word, match subject and verb number, use 'no' instead of '0', and use gerund 'going' after 'like'.

× I always prefer views in rural rural areas because it has a natural atmosphere and almost 0 pollution so I like I like to going to rural areas or rural areas.

✓ I always prefer views in rural areas because they have a natural atmosphere and almost no pollution, so I like going to rural areas.

The phrase 'I like to going' mixes infinitive marker 'to' with gerund 'going'. Use either 'like to go' or 'like going'. Here 'like going' fits the habitual meaning. Ensure consistent verb forms.

× I love to prefer the views in other country because in my country there are a few views but in other countries like Dubai and USA there is a lot of capture capturing views. So I want to capture the views in my.

✓ I prefer the views in other countries because in my country there are few sights, but in other countries like Dubai and the USA there are many interesting places to photograph, so I want to capture the views there.

Multiple number mismatches: 'other country' should be plural 'other countries'; 'a few views' is better as 'few sights'; 'there is a lot of capture capturing views' is ungrammatical—use 'there are many interesting places to photograph'. Also use 'the USA' and finish the sentence with a clear location ('there'). Suggestions: match plural nouns with plural verbs, use appropriate count noun quantifiers ('few' vs 'many'), and correct participle usage.

× I love to prefer the views in other country because in my country there are a few views but in other countries like Dubai and USA there is a lot of capture capturing views. So I want to capture the views in my.

✓ I prefer the views in other countries because in my country there are few sights, but in other countries like Dubai and the USA there are many interesting places to photograph, so I want to capture the views there.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'USA' and incorrect article use with 'other country' (should be plural without article). Also 'a few' suggests a positive small number; 'few' without 'a' emphasizes scarcity, which fits the meaning. Suggestions: use 'the USA' and adjust articles to match meaning.