Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答自然，但有重复和填充词（如 “uh”）且句子较长。应直接开门见山说明喜好，然后用一两句具体细节支持，避免重复表达“take pictures”或“always”。建议练习用更简洁的句子并减少口头禅。

例: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing both people and landscapes to capture meaningful memories. For example, I often take pictures of street performers and sunsets because they remind me of special moments.

提案: 回答含糊且重复，逻辑不够清晰。应先给出明确立场（e.g. both），然后用一两个连贯的原因或例子支持，使用连接词如 'however' 或 'for example' 来组织句子，并减少重复短语。

例: I prefer both urban and rural views. Urban areas interest me for their architecture and busy streets, while rural areas appeal to me because of their peaceful landscapes; for example, after spending time in the city I like to relax in the countryside.

提案: 表达有价值，但有语法和流畅性问题（重复词、填充词、冠词使用错误）。建议先给明确答案（e.g. mostly my own country），并用具体原因和对比支持，同时注意语法细节和连贯性。

例: I mainly prefer views in my own country because it offers both clean cities and picturesque countryside. However, I also enjoy visiting other countries to experience different cultures and landscapes.

× Yes, definitely. I always take pictures of some interesting people and I always take photos of some, uh, beautiful views because I want to create my own memory.

✓ Yes, definitely. I always take pictures of interesting people and photos of beautiful views because I want to create my own memories.

句中使用了不必要的限定词“some”，在泛指習慣性行為時用複數名詞即可；memory 應用複數形式 memories 更符合“多次拍攝以創造多個回憶”的語境。建議去掉“some”，將“memory”改為“memories”。

× Actually both, uh, both views I will enjoy. I always want to say some different views. For example, if I say the urban views for a long time, then I want to try to see the rural views.

✓ Actually both. I enjoy both kinds of views. I always want to see different views. For example, if I look at urban views for a long time, then I want to try to see rural views.

原句中時態和句子結構混亂："I will enjoy" 用於一般喜好時應使用一般現在時 "I enjoy"（習慣性動作）；"want to say some different views" 用法不當，應為 "want to see different views" 表達想看不同景色；"if I say the urban views" 應為 "if I look at urban views" 或 "if I see urban views"。建議統一使用一般現在時和正確動詞搭配（see/look at）。

× The view of my country is excellent. It it has, uh, urban views and rural views and, uh, generally my the view of my country is clean and beautiful, but sometimes I want to go to another country to see.

✓ The views in my country are excellent. It has urban and rural views, and generally the scenery in my country is clean and beautiful, but sometimes I want to go to another country to see other views.

原句存在冠詞和數一致問題："The view of my country is excellent" 不自然，應用複數 "views" 或用 "the scenery"；"It it has" 有重複詞錯誤；"my the view" 冠詞使用錯誤並且重複。建議改為 "The views in my country are..." 或 "The scenery in my country is..."，並刪除多餘重複詞，最後用複數形式表達想看其他國家的多個景色。