Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ не по теме и не соответствует требованиям. Студент повторил вопрос и добавил бессвязную фразу «It's your brother», что делает ответ непонятным. Нужно отвечать напрямую на вопрос, давать тему предложения и, при необходимости, одно-два уточняющих предложения с логическими связками. Также избегайте повторения вопроса и не включайте нерелевантные выражения.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I like capturing city skylines and coastal landscapes because they show different moods. Also, when I travel I often photograph viewpoints to remember the atmosphere.

提案: Короткий ответ, прямой, но слишком краткий и без поддержки. Чтобы получить более высокий балл, нужно дать тему предложения и добавить конкретные причины или примеры, используя связки (for example, because, whereas). Ответ должен состоять из 2–4 предложений, не более пяти.

例: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the energy of cityscapes and architectural details. For example, I like photographing busy streets and modern buildings since they offer interesting lines and lights. However, I sometimes choose rural views for calm scenery.

提案: Ответ уместен, но слишком общий и неразвит. Нужна конкретизация: объясните, почему вам нравятся оба варианта и приведите примеры различий между видами в вашей стране и за границей. Используйте связки (because, while, for instance) и 2–4 предложения для полноты.

例: I like both views in my country and abroad because each offers unique features. For instance, local landscapes feel familiar and nostalgic, while views abroad often show different architecture and natural scenery. Therefore I enjoy photographing both to capture variety.

× Do you like taking pictures of different views? It's your brother.

✓ Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views. That's my brother.

The student response contains two separate utterances that are mismatched: a direct answer to the question followed by an unrelated fragment 'It's your brother.' The fragment is incorrect in reference (should be 'That's my brother' if identifying a photo) and the answer to the question should be a clear affirmative sentence. Improve by responding directly to the question first ('Yes, I do...') and then, if identifying someone in a photo, use the correct demonstrative + possessive form ('That's my brother').

× I like urban views.

✓ I like urban views.

This sentence is already correct. It uses the simple present tense appropriately to express a general preference. No change is needed.

× I like both of them.

✓ I like both.

While 'I like both of them' is not strictly ungrammatical, in context of preferring views in my country or other countries, a more natural and concise reply is 'I like both.' If you want to be explicit, 'I like both of them' is acceptable; prefer shorter phrasing in spoken responses.