Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar and clarity: use correct tense and articles, avoid redundancy, and make the reason more specific. Keep answer within 2–3 sentences and use a linking word if you add detail.

例: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because the photos let me revisit places I miss, and they help me remember details like light and colors when I talk about my trips later.

提案: Make the comparison clear and grammatical: state your preference directly, use correct verb forms, and add a brief reason with a linking word. Avoid vague phrases and extra words like 'will' mistakenly inserted.

例: It depends. In my home country I prefer urban views because I like the architecture and city energy; however, when I travel abroad I usually choose rural scenery because it offers peaceful, scenic landscapes.

提案: Correct vocabulary and sentence structure: use the verb 'travel' or 'views' not 'wheels', and link ideas with correct relative clauses. Give a specific reason for Switzerland to sound natural and concise.

例: I prefer views in other countries, especially places like Switzerland, because its mountain scenery is dramatic and peaceful, which makes me feel relaxed and inspired.

× Definitely yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I can have a look back when I miss the this locations.

✓ Definitely yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I can look back when I miss these locations.

Errors: unnecessary article 'the' before 'this' and wrong demonstrative 'this' with plural 'locations'; also awkward phrase 'have a look back' — better 'look back'. Use plural demonstrative 'these' for plural noun and remove extra article. Suggestion: use 'these locations' and 'look back' for natural phrasing.

× It will depend. If I live in my home country, I prefer will in urban areas.

✓ It depends. If I live in my home country, I prefer urban areas.

Errors: unnecessary 'will' in 'It will depend' and 'prefer will in urban areas' misuses future auxiliary. Use simple present 'It depends' to talk about general preference; 'prefer' takes the object directly ('prefer urban areas'), not 'prefer will in'.

× However if I go abroad I prefer rural areas because it have a scenic view.

✓ However, if I go abroad, I prefer rural areas because they have scenic views.

Errors: missing commas after introductory clause, subject-verb agreement 'it have' is wrong (singular pronoun for plural 'rural areas'), and 'a scenic view' is awkward when referring to multiple areas — use plural 'scenic views' or 'a scenic view' with 'a rural area'. Suggestion: use 'they have scenic views' and add commas for clarity.

× I prefer wheels in other countries, especially in Switzerland.

✓ I prefer traveling in other countries, especially in Switzerland.

Error: 'wheels' is incorrect word choice likely meant 'travelling' or 'walking'. This is a vocabulary error causing pronoun/word misuse. Suggestion: replace with 'traveling' or 'visiting' to express preference for experiencing other countries.

× It has many mountains that with a scenic view that I can enjoy and feel peaceful.

✓ It has many mountains with scenic views that I can enjoy and where I feel peaceful.

Errors: incorrect relative clause 'that with a scenic view' missing verb; repetition of 'that' and awkward structure. Recast to 'mountains with scenic views' and use 'where I feel peaceful' to show location. Also match plural 'views' to 'many mountains'.