Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời tự nhiên nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ dùng không chính xác (ví dụ: "sharing our experiments"). Cần trả lời ngắn gọn hơn, mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể. Hãy sửa lỗi động từ và danh từ, tránh lặp từ, và không quá dài (tối đa 4-5 câu).

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. I often talk to them at weekends or when I'm feeling down, because sharing problems cheers me up. For example, last weekend we discussed job applications and gave each other tips. It always helps me feel supported.

提案: Ý chính rõ nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không rõ nghĩa ("encounter initially reaching situation"). Cần nói trực tiếp, dùng cấu trúc đơn giản và cụ thể hóa ví dụ. Dùng liên từ để nối ý và giải thích chi tiết hơn về loại vấn đề bạn đề cập.

例: We usually talk about personal problems. When someone faces a difficult situation, we sit together and listen, then offer advice. For instance, if a friend struggles with exams, we discuss study strategies and share resources.

提案: Ý rõ nhưng câu bị cắt, ngữ pháp và trật tự từ sai ("feel likes you are. Be listened to, understand by another person"). Cần mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề đầy đủ, dùng mệnh đề giải thích với linking words (because, so) và một ví dụ ngắn.

例: I prefer chatting one-on-one rather than in a group because it feels more personal. In a one-on-one conversation you are more likely to be listened to and get focused advice, so it's easier to talk about sensitive matters.

提案: Ý hợp lý nhưng diễn đạt lủng củng và một số cấu trúc sai ("project to transmit more than received", "do not really listen"). Nên nêu lí do rõ ràng, dùng linking words (because, so) và cấu trúc đúng ngữ pháp. Thêm ví dụ ngắn để minh họa.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because people listen more carefully in person. On social media messages are often rushed or misunderstood, so important conversations are better handled in person.

提案: Câu trả lời ngắn nhưng chứa lỗi ngữ pháp và câu bị ngắt quãng ("it not long lasting", "we. Talk"). Nên dùng câu hoàn chỉnh, thêm linking word (but, however) và một ví dụ minh họa để chứng tỏ mức độ và cách giải quyết mâu thuẫn.

例: Sometimes we argue, but disagreements don't last long because we talk them through afterwards. For example, if we disagree about plans, we calmly explain our views and usually reach a compromise.

× I spend a lot of time chatting with my friends, especially on the weekend or when we feel a little bit sad or disappointed about something.

✓ I spend a lot of time chatting with my friends, especially on weekends or when we feel a little bit sad or disappointed about something.

Use plural 'weekends' for habitual actions that occur regularly; 'on the weekend' is not wrong in some dialects but 'on weekends' is more natural for routines. Keep present tense for habits. Grammar problem type ID:6

× We usually talk about our life, sharing our experiments, and I think it's really good.

✓ We usually talk about our lives, share our experiences, and I think it's really good.

Count noun 'life' should be plural 'lives' when referring to each person's life. 'Sharing our experiments' is incorrect word choice; use 'share our experiences'. Use base verb 'share' to match 'We usually talk' (coordinate verbs should be parallel). Grammar problem type ID:8

× I would say we usually talk about our problems. You know, when one of us encounter initially reaching situation, we decide to sit with the others and listen to them.

✓ I would say we usually talk about our problems. You know, when one of us encounters a difficult situation, we decide to sit with the others and listen to them.

Subject 'one of us' is singular, so verb must be 'encounters' (subject-verb agreement). 'Initially reaching situation' is incorrect collocation; use 'a difficult situation' or 'a challenging situation'. Include article 'a' before 'difficult situation'. Grammar problem type ID:27

× The latter would be better. Chat with only one friend, maybe feel likes you are. Be listened to, understand by another person. They will try to understand and give you advice.

✓ The latter would be better. Chatting with only one friend maybe feels like you are being listened to and understood by another person. They will try to understand you and give you advice.

Use gerund 'Chatting' as subject; 'maybe feel likes you are' is ungrammatical — use 'maybe feels like you are being listened to'. Passive 'be listened to, understand by another person' is incorrect; use 'being listened to and understood'. Also include object 'you' after 'understand'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× For me, I prefer to communicate face to face because when you know we communicate on social media, people tend to project to transmit more than received. It means that everybody do not really listen to you.

✓ For me, I prefer to communicate face to face because when we communicate on social media, people tend to try to transmit more than receive. It means that everybody does not really listen to you.

Remove 'you know' which is unnecessary. Use parallel verb forms 'transmit' and 'receive' (not 'transmit more than received'). 'Everybody do not' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; use 'everybody does not' or better 'not everybody really listens to you.' Grammar problem type ID:11

× Sometimes, but it not long lasting like we just have some arguments and then we. Talk to each other again.

✓ Sometimes, but it is not long lasting; we just have some arguments and then we talk to each other again.

Add verb 'is' after 'it' for a complete verb phrase. Remove the unnecessary period and join clauses; use present simple 'we talk' for habitual action. Ensure full sentences have a subject and verb. Grammar problem type ID:23