Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use specific detail. Reduce redundancy (two “especially”) and fix verb forms. Add a linking phrase to explain why catching up is enjoyable.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. I especially like it when we have new experiences or news to share, because catching up after a long time helps us stay close and exchange useful information.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and specific, relevant examples. Avoid incorrect or odd word choices (e.g., “political sneeze”) and unnecessary repetition. Use linking words (for example, “for instance,” “also”) to list topics coherently.

例: We talk about a wide range of topics. For instance, we discuss current events and politics, share entertainment gossip, and recommend new restaurants, because we have similar tastes and interests.

提案: Make the reason clearer and more concise. Start with a direct statement of preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words like “because” or “so.” Correct small grammar issues (e.g., “share our attitudes and honest opinions”).

例: I prefer talking one-on-one. Because in a private conversation I feel more comfortable sharing my real opinions and we can discuss things in more depth without interruptions.

提案: Use a clear topic sentence and correct grammar. Avoid filler words and complete the sentence. Mention specific advantages of face-to-face communication and use linking words such as “because” and “also.”

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because not only do you hear the words, you can also read facial expressions and body language, which helps you understand emotions and avoid misunderstandings.

提案: Start with a concise topic sentence, then explain briefly why arguments happen and how you handle them. Correct grammar (plural nouns, articles) and avoid repetitive phrases. Add a linking word like “however” to show contrast if you mention resolution.

例: Yes, we sometimes argue because people naturally have different opinions. However, we usually resolve disagreements by listening to each other and finding a compromise so the friendship isn’t harmed.

× I always enjoy have a good conversation with my friends especially.

✓ I always enjoy having a good conversation with my friends, especially.

After the verb 'enjoy', the following verb must be in the -ing form (gerund). Change 'have' to 'having' and add a comma before 'especially' for clarity.

× Especially when you have some new information to share or you want to update or catch up with your friends after you didn't see them for a long time.

✓ Especially when you have new information to share or you want to update or catch up with your friends after you haven't seen them for a long time.

'Didn\'t see' is simple past and conflicts with the present perfect idea of 'after not seeing someone for a long time'. Use 'haven't seen' (present perfect) to indicate a period leading up to now; also remove 'some' before 'new information' for naturalness.

× I must say everything, it could be some political sneeze or it could be some just some entertainment gossips, or it could be some new restaurant update so we can share everything because we have some common interests.

✓ I must say everything: it could be political news, entertainment gossip, or updates about new restaurants. We share these things because we have common interests.

Sentence was long, unorganized and contained wrong word choice ('sneeze' instead of 'news') and unnecessary 'some' and pluralization 'gossips' which is uncountable. Splitting into shorter sentences improves clarity and corrects word choice and plurality.

× If I can choose, I definitely will choose to speak with one single person.

✓ If I could choose, I would definitely choose to speak with a single person.

The conditional idea that expresses preference uses the second conditional: 'If I could... I would...' Also 'one single person' is redundant; use 'a single person'.

× The reason is that we can share on our attitude and our real opinion toward any other topics.

✓ The reason is that we can share our attitudes and our real opinions toward various topics.

Remove unnecessary preposition 'on' after 'share' (we 'share something'). Use plural 'attitudes' and 'opinions' to match general reference and 'various topics' is more natural than 'any other topics'.

× Definitely their communication by face to face method is much more better because all not only the word but you can also notice the facial expression from from another person and you can also express your feeling and.

✓ Definitely communication face-to-face is much better because not only words but also facial expressions from the other person help, and you can express your feelings as well.

Original had wrong pronoun 'their', awkward word order, repeated 'from', missing noun forms and incomplete ending. Use 'communication face-to-face', 'much better' (not 'more better'), 'words' plural, 'facial expressions', 'the other person', and complete 'express your feelings'.

× To be honest, there's a time that we argue with each other because it's very usual for human being that you don't have the same idea on everything.

✓ To be honest, there are times when we argue with each other because it is normal for human beings not to have the same ideas about everything.

Use plural 'there are times' for repeated occurrences, 'human beings' plural, and 'ideas about' is the correct preposition. 'It's very usual' is improved to 'it is normal' for naturalness.

× Sometimes you just have different opinion in the same topic, so that's why we have some argument.

✓ Sometimes you just have different opinions on the same topic, so that's why we have arguments.

Use plural 'opinions' and 'arguments' when speaking generally. Use preposition 'on' or 'about' with 'topic' ('on the same topic'). 'Some' before 'argument' was unnecessary.