Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cần cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản (thì, danh-động từ), phát âm và sắp xếp câu rõ ràng hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (khi nào, ở đâu, vì sao) sử dụng từ nối đơn giản như “because” hoặc “so”. Tránh tiếng ừ ừ và lỗi số nhiều/đơn (friend → friends, chatting → chat).

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. We usually chat over coffee or meals because it helps us relax and catch up. For example, last weekend we talked for two hours about our plans and work.

提案: Cần rõ ràng và cụ thể hơn về nội dung cuộc trò chuyện; dùng thì và danh từ đúng (talks → talk), tránh từ không rõ nghĩa (“frame”, “line”). Sử dụng liên từ như “for example” hoặc “such as” để liệt kê chủ đề một cách mạch lạc, và cố gắng đưa 1 ví dụ cụ thể.

例: We talk about many topics, such as work, daily life and future plans. For example, we often discuss job challenges and advise each other on career goals.

提案: Cần trả lời rõ ràng “group” hay “one friend” và giải thích lí do ngắn gọn bằng cấu trúc đơn giản. Tránh từ không chính xác và câu dài rối; dùng từ nối “because” hoặc “when” để giải thích hoàn cảnh. Luyện phát âm tên/thuật ngữ và ngữ pháp đơn giản.

例: It depends. I prefer chatting in a group when we are socializing or celebrating because it is lively. But when I need serious advice, I prefer talking to one close friend because it is quieter and more private.

提案: Cần dùng cụm từ chính xác (face-to-face), tránh số/ký hiệu lạ (“5 to 5”). Trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích lý do với 1–2 chi tiết; sử dụng từ nối như “because” hoặc “so” để rõ ràng. Thực hành câu mô tả lợi ích của giao tiếp trực tiếp so với trực tuyến.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can use body language and facial expressions to explain things. However, sometimes I use social media when my friends are far away or busy.

提案: Cần dùng từ chính xác (argue/discuss), tránh từ lẫn lộn (“bottle”, “queue”). Trả lời trực tiếp, nêu lý do và kết luận ngắn gọn. Dùng liên từ như “because” hoặc “but” để nối ý và đưa ví dụ ngắn về một lần tranh luận bình thường để minh họa.

例: Yes, we sometimes argue, but usually it is just a discussion because we have different opinions. For example, we once disagreed about how to split tasks for a project, and we resolved it by talking and compromising.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friend.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends.

The speaker refers to chatting with friends in general, so the plural 'friends' is correct. Use plural when talking about more than one person or a general activity involving multiple people. Suggestion: Use 'friends' when describing conversations with multiple people or as a general habit.

× We usually chatting during coffees or uh meal.

✓ We usually chat during coffee or meals.

After adverbs like 'usually' the base form of the verb is required: 'usually chat'. 'Coffees' is unnatural; use 'coffee' (uncountable) or 'meals' (plural) depending on meaning. Suggestion: Use 'usually chat' and choose 'coffee' (uncountable) or plural 'meals' for regular occasions.

× It's the help of relax and unwind.

✓ It helps me relax and unwind.

The original sentence uses incorrect structure 'It's the help of...'. Use the verb 'helps' + object + verb infinitive 'relax' to express benefit. Ensure pronoun 'me' is included for clarity. Suggestion: Say 'It helps me relax and unwind.'

× We talk about few hours sometime be someone here.

✓ We sometimes talk for a few hours when someone is here.

Word order and prepositions are incorrect. Use 'sometimes' before the verb, 'for a few hours' to indicate duration, and 'when someone is here' for the condition. Suggestion: Place adverbs correctly and use 'for' with time expressions.

× We talks everything with frame, sometime about the job, sometime about the, uh line, everything sometimes about the other people who have no goal.

✓ We talk about everything with friends, sometimes about jobs, sometimes about life; sometimes about other people who have no goals.

After 'we' the verb should be base form 'talk' not 'talks'. 'Frame' is likely a mispronunciation of 'friends'. Use plurals for general nouns: 'jobs', 'goals'. Use semicolons or commas to separate ideas. Suggestion: Use 'we talk' and correct nouns to 'friends', 'jobs', 'life', 'goals'.

× Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?

✓ Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?

This sentence is correct; no change needed. It correctly contrasts 'a group of people' (singular group) and 'one friend' (singular).

× Uh, it depends sometimes if we have Rob, uh, a glass, umm, offering or in, uh, working area is the band.

✓ Uh, it depends. Sometimes if we have a work gathering or are in the workplace, we prefer a group.

The original is unclear and has incorrect phrases like 'a glass offering' and 'working area is the band'. Rephrase to convey meaning: 'work gathering' or 'workplace' and 'prefer a group'. Suggestion: Clarify context (work or social event) and use simple structures.

× But if, uh, it really want to targeting and we talk with our friend only I don't want to talk in Europe because in Europe we have many people and we don't.

✓ But if we really want to focus on someone and talk with only one friend, I don't want to talk in public because there are many people and we can't concentrate.

Pronouns and verb forms are incorrect: 'it really want' should be 'we really want'; 'talk in Europe' likely means 'talk in public'. Use 'there are many people' for existence and 'can't concentrate' for intended meaning. Suggestion: Use correct subjects ('we'), 'talk in public' and 'there are' for existence.

× They can saw the pain.

✓ They can see the pain.

The verb 'saw' is past tense; context requires present 'see'. Use correct verb form to match meaning. Suggestion: Use 'see' instead of 'saw'.

× Sometime I want to talk 5 to 5 with someone, it's easy for me to explain.

✓ Sometimes I want to talk one-on-one with someone; it's easier for me to explain.

Use 'Sometimes' (adverb) and the idiom 'one-on-one' for two-person conversations. 'It's easy' should be comparative 'it's easier' when comparing to other modes. Suggestion: Use 'one-on-one' and 'easier' for comparison.

× Sometime I don't know how to explain by English.

✓ Sometimes I don't know how to explain in English.

Use the preposition 'in' with languages: 'explain in English'. Also use 'Sometimes' and correct article usage. Suggestion: Say 'explain in English'.

× I can give body language to explain for that people they can easily understand and sometimes it people.

✓ I can use body language to explain so those people can easily understand, but sometimes it doesn't work.

Pronouns and phrasing are incorrect: 'give body language' should be 'use body language'; 'for that people' should be 'so those people'; 'sometimes it people' unclear—replaced with 'sometimes it doesn't work.' Suggestion: Use clear connectors 'so' and correct pronouns 'those people'.

× So far we cannot contact 5 to 5.

✓ Sometimes we cannot contact someone one-on-one.

'So far' is inappropriate; use 'Sometimes' for occasional inability. 'Contact 5 to 5' should be 'contact one-on-one' or 'contact someone individually.' Suggestion: Use 'one-on-one' or 'individually' for two-person contact.

× Yes, I do sometime we discuss the bottle uh problem and we have different idea.

✓ Yes, I do. Sometimes we discuss problems and we have different ideas.

Use 'Sometimes' and plural forms 'problems' and 'ideas' for general statements. Also split into two sentences or use a conjunction. Suggestion: Use plural nouns for general occurrences and proper punctuation.

× So we have a queue.

✓ So we have a disagreement.

'Queue' (line) is incorrect in context; likely meant 'queue' as 'quarrel' or 'argument'. Use 'disagreement' or 'argument'. Suggestion: Choose words that match intended meaning: 'disagreement' or 'argument'.

× It's a normal in friends and being friends in our relationship.

✓ It's normal among friends and part of our relationship to have disagreements.

Incorrect word order and article use. Use 'normal among friends' and explain it's 'part of our relationship'. Suggestion: Use 'among friends' and 'part of our relationship'.

× Yeah, I think so every friend also have.

✓ Yeah, I think so; every friend also has them.

Subject-verb agreement and noun reference: 'every friend' (singular) requires 'has' not 'have'. 'Them' clarifies what friends have (disagreements). Suggestion: Use 'every' with singular verb: 'every friend has'.