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Part 1

試験官

Do you like chatting with friends?

受験者

Awkwardly speaking, I'm not good at chatting with friends, but I like mailing with my friends. I think sometimes send texts is a good way to chat.

試験官

What do you usually chat about with friends?

受験者

I usually chat with my friends about which canteen we will eat at noon and what game we will play in the evening.

試験官

Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?

受験者

I prefer to chat with only one friend because I don't think I have enough energy to check with so many people at one time.

試験官

Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?

受験者

I prefer to communicate face to face because I think face to face communication can solve many issues.

試験官

Do you argue with friends?

受験者

Of course I think I think two people have two opinions. Argument is common.

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総合

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Part 1

Do you like chatting with friends?

スコア: 62.0

提案: 回答要更自然、简洁,并直接回应问题。避免不必要的词语(如“awkwardly speaking”),把时态和单复数弄正确(mailing, send texts)。可以先给出直接回答,然后用一两句具体说明方式和原因。

: Not really — I'm not very good at chatting in person, but I often text my friends. For example, we usually use messaging apps to arrange plans because it's quick and convenient.

What do you usually chat about with friends?

スコア: 80.0

提案: 回答结构清晰且相关,但可以更自然地表达并加一点细节使内容更具体,例如说明常去的食堂名字、常玩的游戏或讨论的频率。使用连接词让句子更连贯。

: We usually talk about practical things like where to eat at lunchtime — for example, the main campus canteen — and what games to play in the evening, such as football or online multiplayer games.

Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?

スコア: 78.0

提案: 回答表达清楚且理由合理,但句子可更自然,避免口语化表达如"check with so many people"。可用更恰当的词汇并给出具体场景。

: I prefer talking one-on-one because group conversations can be tiring and it's harder to follow everyone's opinions. For instance, I find it easier to make plans with a single friend.

Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?

スコア: 75.0

提案: 观点明确,但表述可以更具体并举例说明为什么面对面更好。可用连接词增强逻辑,如"because"后面补充结果或例子。

: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's easier to understand emotions and resolve misunderstandings. For example, when discussing a group project, meeting in person helps us make decisions faster.

Do you argue with friends?

スコア: 66.0

提案: 回答太简短且有重复("I think I think")。应先直接回答,然后用一两句说明频率和处理方式,避免泛泛而谈。

: Yes, we sometimes argue because people have different opinions. However, we usually talk it through and apologise if needed, so the arguments don't last long.

文法

Verb + -ing form

× Awkwardly speaking, I'm not good at chatting with friends, but I like mailing with my friends. I think sometimes send texts is a good way to chat.

Awkwardly speaking, I'm not good at chatting with friends, but I like emailing my friends. I think sometimes sending texts is a good way to chat.

错误类型:动词 + -ing 形式(英语中某些动词后需用动名词)。“mailing with my friends”不自然,表示发电子邮件应使用“email”作动词并接宾语或用“emailing my friends”。“I think sometimes send texts”中动词短语应使用动名词“sending”作为think的宾语从句中的形式。建议:将“mailing”改为“emailing”,并把“send texts”改为“sending texts”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I usually chat with my friends about which canteen we will eat at noon and what game we will play in the evening.

I usually chat with my friends about which canteen we will eat at at noon and what game we will play in the evening.

错误类型:介词使用不当。原句中“eat at noon”位置稍显不明确,习惯表达可在“eat at”后加地点,再用“at noon”表示时间。更自然的表达是“which canteen we will eat at at noon”或改写为“which canteen we will go to for lunch”。建议:可改为“which canteen we will eat at at noon”或更自然的“which canteen we will go to for lunch”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I don't think I have enough energy to check with so many people at one time.

I prefer to chat with only one friend because I don't think I have enough energy to keep in touch with so many people at one time.

错误类型:介词/短语使用不当。原句中“check with so many people”用法不合适,意思应为“与许多人保持联系”或“处理许多人”,常用表达是“keep in touch with”或“deal with”。建议:根据语境将“check with”改为“keep in touch with”或“deal with”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I think face to face communication can solve many issues.

I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I think face-to-face communication can solve many issues.

错误类型:介词/短语使用与拼写。短语作方式副词或复合形容词时应连字符“face-to-face”。写作中要保持一致,口语可省略连字符。建议:在书面或正式场合使用连字符,写成“face-to-face”。

Sentence structure errors

× Of course I think I think two people have two opinions. Argument is common.

Of course. I think two people can have two different opinions. Arguments are common.

错误类型:句子结构和复数/单数问题。原句有重复“I think I think”,需要删去重复并改进表达。“two people have two opinions”更自然应加情态或形容词表可能性,并且“Argument is common”中“Argument”作为可数名词应使用复数“Arguments are common”。建议:删除重复短语,使用“can have two different opinions”,并将“Argument”改为复数形式。

重要語彙

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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