Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more fluent and correct grammar; avoid filler words and repeat structures. Start with a clear topic sentence, use one or two supporting reasons, and limit to 2–3 sentences. Replace 'uh' and incorrect forms (e.g., 'I chatting') with correct verbs and concise phrasing.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax when I'm tired or feeling anxious. For example, a short conversation after work usually calms me and lifts my mood.

提案: Be more grammatically accurate and add a specific detail using a linking word. Say who you talk to or give a concrete example of a topic to make your answer more informative.

例: I usually talk with close friends about my day, especially work or study problems. For instance, I often tell them about a difficult task at work and they give advice, which makes me feel calmer and supported.

提案: Correct sentence structure and vocabulary: use 'prefer' and correct verb forms. Explain briefly why with a linking word and a specific situation to support your preference.

例: I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group because I often feel anxious and shy in large groups. For example, in big gatherings I find it hard to join conversations, so one-on-one talks are more comfortable.

提案: Avoid redundant words (e.g., 'like prefer') and be precise. State your preference clearly, give a reason, and add a short example. Use correct phrasing such as 'face to face' or 'in person.'

例: I prefer to communicate in person because it's easier to read facial expressions and emotions. For example, when discussing something important I always meet a friend face to face to avoid misunderstandings.

提案: Use correct verb patterns and pluralization: 'argue with my friends' and 'about everything.' Briefly explain a typical cause and how you resolve arguments to show maturity and add detail.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different opinions about many things. However, we usually resolve disagreements by listening to each other and finding a compromise.

× Yes of course I like chatting with my friends because uh then I feel tired or in anxiety. I chatting with my friends and it helps me to relax.

✓ Yes, of course I like chatting with my friends because when I feel tired or anxious, I chat with them and it helps me relax.

Multiple issues: incorrect conjunction/temporal word 'then' should be 'when' (Grammar problem type ID 16: Incorrect conjunction use), incorrect preposition 'in anxiety' should be adjective 'anxious' (ID 13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs), missing auxiliary for continuous 'I chatting' should be 'I chat' or 'I am chatting' (ID 27: Subject-verb agreement errors / ID 6: Present tense issue). Also punctuation and repetition fixed. Suggestion: Use 'when' to indicate time, use adjective 'anxious', and use correct verb form 'chat' or 'am chatting' depending on meaning.

× I usually chat my friends about my day and uh, it makes me feel calmer and uh, more supported.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about my day, and it makes me feel calmer and more supported.

Incorrect use of preposition: 'chat my friends' needs 'chat with my friends' (Grammar problem type ID 11). Also add comma before 'and' for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'chat with' to indicate conversing with someone.

× I don't like to chat with a group of people but I love chat with one friend because sometimes I feel like anxiety and shy.

✓ I don't like chatting with a group of people, but I love chatting with one friend because sometimes I feel anxious and shy.

Subject-verb and verb form issues: use gerund 'chatting' after 'like' and 'love' (ID 8: Verb + -ing form and ID 27 Subject-verb agreement). Incorrect expression 'feel like anxiety and shy' — should be adjective 'anxious and shy' (ID 13). Suggestion: Use 'chatting' for activities and adjectives 'anxious' and 'shy' to describe feelings.

× I like prefer to communicate with my friends face face.

✓ I prefer to communicate with my friends face-to-face.

Incorrect verb combination: either 'I like' or 'I prefer', not 'I like prefer' (ID 16 Incorrect conjunction/use of verbs). Also incorrect expression 'face face' should be 'face-to-face' (ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions/phrasing). Suggestion: Use 'prefer' alone and hyphenated 'face-to-face' for in-person communication.

× Yes, of course, I often argue my friends, because we all have our ideas about every things.

✓ Yes, of course, I often argue with my friends, because we all have our ideas about everything.

Missing preposition 'with' after 'argue' (ID 11) and incorrect verb phrase listed as subject-verb agreement/structure (ID 27). Also 'every things' is incorrect; use 'everything' (ID 13 Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs or ID 26 sentence structure). Suggestion: Use 'argue with' to indicate disagreement and 'everything' as a single word.