Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答总体明确但有语法和用词错误，句子冗长且有重复。建议在陈述主题句后用一到两句补充细节，注意时态和动词形式（例如“always chatting”应为“always chat”或“am always chatting”），并使用连接词（e.g. and, so）使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax. For example, I usually chat with them after dinner, and we share what happened during the day to cheer each other up.

提案: 内容具体但表达不准确且冗长，有语法错误和不自然的短语（如“early chat”、“what teacher answered me”）。建议用简洁的主题句开头，随后用一两个具体例子支持，并改正时态与语序问题，使用连接词（for example, such as, and）提升连贯性。

例: I usually talk about events from my day, both happy and sad. For example, we discuss things that happened in class, like questions the teacher asked and funny moments that made us laugh.

提案: 观点清晰但有语法错误（复数/单数不一致、时态混用）和表述啰嗦。建议把主题句简短明确，然后用过去事件作为支持，注意单复数一致和正确的时态；用连接词如“because”或“for example”自然衔接。

例: I prefer chatting one-on-one because conversations are usually deeper and more focused. For example, yesterday I spoke with my best friend about how to handle a difficult person, and she gave me sincere advice.

提案: 理由明确但有语法和时态问题（如缺少不定式 to、动词单复数）。建议使用一至两句支持细节，确保动词形式正确，并添加连接词提高流畅度。此外可举具体场景说明优势。

例: I prefer communicating via social media because it gives me more time to think and compose my replies. For example, I often share interesting videos with online friends and we discuss our opinions in the chat.

提案: 回答有逻辑但语言混乱、语法错误较多（词序、时态、冠词和动词形式）。建议先用一句话直接回答，再用一到两句具体说明冲突的内容和结果，注意语法（e.g. plural/singular, past tense）和句子连接。

例: Yes, we sometimes argue because we have different opinions. For instance, last month we disagreed about whether to study literature; I didn't like it and wanted to switch subjects, so we discussed our preferences and ultimately chose different subjects that suited each of us.

× For example, I always chatting with friends after dinner.

✓ For example, I always chat with friends after dinner.

句子中使用了助动词或习惯性频率副词（always）时，谓语动词应为一般现在时的基本形式“chat”，而不是现在分词“chatting”。建议记住在一般现在时的陈述句里，除第三人称单数外，动词用原形或加 -s/-es。

× We talk about something happened today and cheer each other up.

✓ We talk about something that happened today and cheer each other up.

“happened”是过去式或过去分词，这里作定语修饰“something”需用从句“that happened”或使用过去分词短语但需有合适结构。建议使用关系代词that引导限定性定语从句：“something that happened today”。

× I early chat with my friends about something happened today like happy and sad events.

✓ I often chat with my friends early about things that happened today, like happy and sad events.

原句中“early”位置和用法不当，且“something happened”应改为“things that happened”。“Early”通常修饰时间（early in the morning）或放在动词前作为频率副词不合适，用“often”或将“early”放在表示时间的短语中更自然。建议调整词序并使用复数“things”。

× For example, I always chat with my friends about something happening in class like what teacher answered me and questioned me and what I answered and we also share funny stories that made us laugh.

✓ For example, I always chat with my friends about things happening in class, like what the teacher asked me and what I answered, and we also share funny stories that make us laugh.

句中“what teacher answered me and questioned me”结构不正确，应为“what the teacher asked me”。“Made us laugh”改为现在时“make us laugh”以保持一般现在时的一致性。注意定冠词“the teacher”和句子并列结构的并列连词和标点。

× I prefer to chat with only one friends because one-on-one conversation are deeper and more focused.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because one-on-one conversations are deeper and more focused.

“one friends”应为单数“one friend”。“one-on-one conversation are”主谓不一致，复数名词“conversations”与复数谓语“are”匹配，或者改为单数“conversation is”。建议根据意思选择单复数并保持主谓一致。

× For example, I chat with my best friend yesterday about how to deal with an awful person with shared emotions and exchange opinions and she gave me sincere advice how to deal with it.

✓ For example, I chatted with my best friend yesterday about how to deal with an awful person, shared our feelings and exchanged opinions, and she gave me sincere advice on how to deal with it.

描述过去的事件应使用过去时态，故“chat”改为“chatted”，“exchange”改为“exchanged”。另外需补充连词和介词短语（advice on how）。“with shared emotions”表述生硬，改为“shared our feelings”。

× I prefer communicate via social media because it make me more time to think about and compose my replies.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because it gives me more time to think and compose my replies.

缺少不定式“to communicate”。“make me more time”用法错误，应为“gives me more time”或“allows me more time”。同时“think about and compose my replies”中的“about”多余，改为“think and compose”。

× For example, I always chat with my online friends via social media. We shared some interesting videos and exchange opinions.

✓ For example, I always chat with my online friends via social media. We share some interesting videos and exchange opinions.

前半句为一般现在时，后句应保持时态一致，将过去时“shared”改为现在时“share”。同时“exchange opinions”保持现在时。

× Yes, sometimes argue with friends because we have different opinions.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with friends because we have different opinions.

原句缺少主语“I”，造成不完整。建议在句子中补上主语以构成完整句子。

× For instance, last month we argued about which subject to study should prefer literature, but I didn't like it and wanted to switch to other subject.

✓ For instance, last month we argued about which subject to study; some preferred literature, but I didn't and wanted to switch to another subject.

原句结构混乱，“which subject to study should prefer literature”语序和从句缺陷。应将观点分开表述：有人偏好文学（some preferred literature），而我不喜欢并想换到另一个科目。“other subject”需改为“another subject”。

× In the end, we exchanged our opinions and choose different subject which suit each other.

✓ In the end, we exchanged our opinions and chose different subjects that suited each of us.

动词时态需为过去时“chose”。名词复数“subjects”。关系从句中动词与主语一致，“that suited each of us”更自然。