Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and grammatically correct by directly answering the question and providing a reason with supporting details.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me stay connected and share experiences, which makes spending time together more enjoyable.

提案: Your answer lacks specific content and is repetitive. Try to provide specific topics you discuss and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: I usually chat about our daily lives, hobbies, and funny stories because it helps us relax and strengthen our friendship.

提案: Your answer is informal and contains unclear phrases. Try to use clearer vocabulary and provide reasons with linking words to support your preference.

例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it is more lively and I enjoy hearing different opinions during the conversation.

提案: Your answer is generally clear but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to correct grammar and make your points more concise and coherent using linking words.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see people's real emotions, whereas social media lacks this personal touch.

提案: Your answer does not directly address the question about arguing and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer the question directly and provide specific examples or reasons.

例: Sometimes I argue with my friends, but I always try to support them and offer advice to resolve our disagreements peacefully.

× Yes, because I'm a people who likes to communicate with people, trying to spend time with my friends, with my relatives and I like chatting.

✓ Yes, because I'm a person who likes to communicate with people, trying to spend time with my friends and my relatives, and I like chatting.

The word 'people' is plural, but the sentence uses 'I'm' which is singular. The correct singular noun is 'person'. Also, 'with my friends, with my relatives' is better joined with 'and' for clarity.

× Yes, because I'm a people who likes to communicate with people, trying to spend time with my friends, with my relatives and I like chatting.

✓ Yes, because I'm a person who likes to communicate with people, tries to spend time with my friends and my relatives, and likes chatting.

The phrase 'trying to spend time' is incorrect here because the subject is 'who' referring to 'person' and should use 'tries' to agree with singular subject. Alternatively, rephrasing to 'and I like chatting' is clearer.

× I am a sociable person who likes to stay connected with others and we just joking and joking and it's so fun and that's all.

✓ I am a sociable person who likes to stay connected with others and we just joke and joke; it's so fun and that's all.

The phrase 'we just joking' is incorrect; the verb should be in base form 'joke' after 'we'. 'Joking' is a present participle and does not fit here.

× OK, I prefer to chat with a group of people than chat with only one person because it's so boring and I like when I communicate with a lot of PE people and that's all.

✓ OK, I prefer to chat with a group of people rather than chat with only one person because it's so boring and I like when I communicate with a lot of people and that's all.

The phrase 'a lot of PE people' is unclear and likely a typo. It should be 'a lot of people'. Also, 'prefer to chat with a group of people than chat' should be 'prefer to chat with a group of people rather than chat' for correct comparison.

× OK, I prefer to chat with a group of people than chat with only one person because it's so boring and I like when I communicate with a lot of PE people and that's all.

✓ OK, I prefer to chat with a group of people rather than chat with only one person because it's so boring, and I like when I communicate with a lot of people, and that's all.

The conjunction 'than' is used incorrectly here; 'rather than' is the correct phrase for preference comparison. Also, commas improve sentence clarity.

× Sure, I prefer communicate with people face to face than social media because I I like to see a real life emotions of people when I communicate with them.

✓ Sure, I prefer to communicate with people face to face rather than via social media because I like to see the real-life emotions of people when I communicate with them.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to communicate'. Also, 'than social media' should be 'rather than via social media' to correctly express comparison and preposition use. 'A real life emotions' is incorrect; it should be 'the real-life emotions'.

× Sure, I prefer communicate with people face to face than social media because I I like to see a real life emotions of people when I communicate with them.

✓ Sure, I prefer to communicate with people face to face rather than via social media because I like to see the real-life emotions of people when I communicate with them.

The phrase 'a real life emotions' is incorrect because 'emotions' is plural and 'a' is singular. It should be 'the real-life emotions'.

× Sure, I prefer communicate with people face to face than social media because I I like to see a real life emotions of people when I communicate with them. Then social media because you don't see a lot of emotions in social media.

✓ Sure, I prefer to communicate with people face to face rather than via social media because I like to see the real-life emotions of people when I communicate with them. Social media doesn't show a lot of emotions.

The phrase 'Then social media because...' is a sentence fragment and unclear. It should be rephrased to a complete sentence. Also, 'prefer communicate' needs 'to' after 'prefer'.

× Yes, I always try to support my friends and always give my advices to my lovely person, especially my lovely best friend.

✓ Yes, I always try to support my friends and always give my advice to my lovely person, especially my lovely best friend.

The word 'advices' is incorrect because 'advice' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Use 'advice' instead.