Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like chatting with friends?
受験者
Yes, I do like chatting with my friends because this way I can catch up with the latest news around me and also I can strengthen our bonds with my family members and friends.
試験官
What do you usually chat about with friends?
受験者
Well, we usually chat about daily life. Yes, daily experience after a long day at work or at school. It's also helped me feel more relaxed. And yeah, it's a good way for me to let my hair down after a busy week.
試験官
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
受験者
I prefer both depending on the situation. When I want to discuss something private, I usually chat with only one close friend because it feels more personal and comfortable. However, I also enjoy group chats since they are more lively and fine and we can share memorable moments together.
試験官
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
受験者
I prefer communicates via social media, especially in Instagram because it's really convenient. I can talk, video call and see our family members or friends whenever I want despite long distance.
試験官
Do you argue with friends?
受験者
Yes of course I do argue with my friends like usually, but after that we can understand more about each other and we just like more fun after argument.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
スコア: 80.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng nên tránh lặp từ "friends" và "family members" trong cùng một câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Bạn cũng nên tách câu dài thành hai câu ngắn để dễ hiểu hơn.
例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me catch up with the latest news. Moreover, it strengthens the bonds I have with them and my family.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
スコア: 75.0提案: Bạn nên tránh dùng các từ ngữ không trang trọng như "yeah" và câu trả lời nên được nối với nhau bằng các liên từ để mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cố gắng cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về chủ đề trò chuyện.
例: We usually talk about our daily lives, such as experiences at work or school. This helps me relax and unwind after a busy week.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
スコア: 85.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng nên tránh dùng từ "fine" không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Bạn cũng có thể thêm một câu kết để làm rõ ý hơn.
例: I prefer both depending on the situation. For private matters, I chat with one close friend because it feels more personal. However, group chats are lively and allow us to share memorable moments together, which I also enjoy.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
スコア: 70.0提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ như "prefer communicates" nên là "prefer to communicate". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi nhỏ để tự nhiên hơn.
例: I prefer to communicate via social media, especially Instagram, because it is very convenient. I can chat, video call, and see my family and friends anytime, even if they are far away.
Do you argue with friends?
スコア: 65.0提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc không rõ ràng. Bạn nên tránh dùng từ "like usually" không đúng và nên diễn đạt lại câu để rõ nghĩa hơn.
例: Yes, I do argue with my friends sometimes, but after the argument, we understand each other better and our friendship becomes stronger.
文法
× I prefer communicates via social media, especially in Instagram because it's really convenient.
✓ I prefer communicating via social media, especially on Instagram because it's really convenient.
The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the gerund form (verb + -ing), so 'communicates' is incorrect here. Also, the correct preposition with 'Instagram' is 'on', not 'in'. Therefore, the sentence should be 'I prefer communicating via social media, especially on Instagram because it's really convenient.'
× I prefer communicates via social media, especially in Instagram because it's really convenient.
✓ I prefer communicating via social media, especially on Instagram because it's really convenient.
The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'Instagram'. The correct preposition is 'on' when referring to social media platforms. So, it should be 'on Instagram'. This correction improves the sentence's accuracy.
× Yes of course I do argue with my friends like usually, but after that we can understand more about each other and we just like more fun after argument.
✓ Yes, of course I do argue with my friends usually, but after that we understand each other better and have more fun after the argument.
The original sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect word order. 'Like usually' is incorrect; 'usually' should be placed after the verb phrase. Also, 'we can understand more about each other' is better expressed as 'we understand each other better'. 'We just like more fun after argument' is unclear and should be 'we have more fun after the argument'. These changes improve clarity and grammatical correctness.
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