Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases like 'selling the problem'. Try to use simpler, clearer expressions and correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise and natural.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. We often share our problems and daily experiences during meals or coffee breaks. It's a great way to support each other, and I always look forward to these conversations.

提案: Your answer has many grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'selling calls'. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use correct grammar, and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: When I chat with my friends, we usually talk about our daily routines, any problems we are facing, and new events happening in our lives. We enjoy sharing these experiences because it helps us stay connected.

提案: Your answer is confusing due to unclear phrases like 'selling good' and 'interferent time'. Focus on expressing your preference clearly with correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid unnecessary repetition and ensure coherence.

例: I prefer chatting with one close friend because I feel comfortable sharing everything without hesitation. However, I also enjoy group chats sometimes, depending on the situation.

提案: Your answer conveys the main idea but has grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing. Try to use more natural expressions and avoid repetition. Use linking words to improve coherence.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because we can see each other's facial expressions and better understand feelings. However, if meeting in person is not possible, I use social media like FaceTime to stay connected.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains many grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct sentence structures. Also, avoid filler words and be concise.

例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends when we have different opinions on a topic. However, we always try to resolve our disagreements peacefully in the end.

× Yes, I really enjoyed the chatting with my friends.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends.

The question is in present tense asking about a general habit, so the answer should also be in present tense. 'Enjoyed' is past tense, which is incorrect here.

× We are sharing our problem and things with each other.

✓ We share our problems and things with each other.

The present continuous 'are sharing' is not appropriate for habitual actions. Use simple present 'share' for regular activities. Also, 'problem' should be plural 'problems' to match the context.

× We are like to chat at the meal or coffee time and this is the wonderful way to selling the problem or a thing.

✓ We like to chat at meal or coffee time and this is a wonderful way to solve problems or discuss things.

'Are like' is incorrect; use 'like' for preferences. 'The meal' should be 'meal' without 'the'. 'Selling' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'solving' or 'discussing'. Also, 'a thing' is vague; 'things' is better.

× So to each other and I enjoy both chatting with my friends.

✓ So we talk to each other, and I enjoy chatting with my friends.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding 'we talk' clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× When I chat with my friends we are talking about the daily life, routine life and the any situation we are suffering from them or any the new new event or new happening in our life.

✓ When I chat with my friends, we talk about daily life, routine life, any situations we are suffering from, or any new events or happenings in our lives.

Use simple present 'talk' for habitual actions instead of present continuous 'are talking'. Remove unnecessary articles and repeated words for clarity.

× We are sharing to each other and we are enjoyed to sell to chat with my friends and selling calls.

✓ We share with each other and enjoy chatting with my friends and making calls.

'Sharing to' is incorrect; use 'share with'. 'Are enjoyed' is incorrect; use 'enjoy'. 'Sell to chat' is incorrect; likely intended 'chat'. 'Selling calls' is unclear; 'making calls' is appropriate.

× I prefer to chat with only one my close friend, because he is the my best friend and I am selling good with with him everything without any hesitation and uncomfort, uncomfortable feelness.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one close friend because he is my best friend, and I can share everything with him without any hesitation or discomfort.

Remove unnecessary 'the' before 'my best friend'. 'Selling good' is incorrect; likely meant 'sharing well'. 'Uncomfort, uncomfortable feelness' is incorrect; use 'discomfort'.

× And yeah, group chat is also preferred. Interferent time is the setting to each other, the normal talking.

✓ And yeah, group chat is also preferred. Different times are set for talking to each other normally.

'Interferent time' is incorrect; likely meant 'different times'. 'Setting to each other' is incorrect; use 'set for talking to each other'.

× Yeah, I prefer the communication in face to face because we each see each other through facial expression to feeling for each other, the physical awareness.

✓ Yeah, I prefer face-to-face communication because we can see each other's facial expressions and feel each other's emotions, with physical awareness.

'The communication in face to face' is incorrect; use 'face-to-face communication'. 'Through facial expression to feeling' is unclear; corrected to 'facial expressions and feel each other's emotions'.

× And yeah, if the if the face to face communication is not possible, then yeah, of course social media is the better way to communication via the FaceTime calls.

✓ And yeah, if face-to-face communication is not possible, then of course social media is a better way to communicate via FaceTime calls.

'The better way to communication' is incorrect; use 'a better way to communicate'. Remove repeated 'if the'.

× Now they they are more preferable.

✓ Now they are more preferred.

'Preferable' is an adjective meaning 'desirable', but 'preferred' is the correct past participle to indicate choice. Also, remove repeated 'they'.

× Yeah, obviously we are argue with our friends because of the at the some kind of the topic are not, uh, each other the same opinion is the obviously different opinion is there.

✓ Yeah, obviously we argue with our friends because sometimes we have different opinions on some topics.

'We are argue' is incorrect; use simple present 'we argue'. Remove unnecessary articles and clarify sentence structure.

× So yeah, we can argue. And also at the end of the topic, we have to resolve the problem in the which topic we are the argue.

✓ So yeah, we can argue. And at the end of the discussion, we have to resolve the problem we argued about.

Original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. Simplify and clarify meaning with proper sentence structure.