Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and naturally, avoiding confusing phrases like 'sell everything to friends.' Use simple and correct sentences to describe your feelings about chatting with friends.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because we share both difficult and happy moments without any hesitation or judgment.

提案: Your answer is repetitive and contains many grammatical mistakes. Focus on giving a clear and concise response with relevant details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: I usually talk about what's happening in my life and ask my friends about their current activities. We also discuss challenges we face, which helps us support each other and have fun together.

提案: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Explain why you prefer chatting with one close friend.

例: I prefer chatting with one close friend because I feel more comfortable sharing personal thoughts and feelings with someone I trust deeply.

提案: Your answer has good ideas but is affected by grammatical errors and unclear expressions. Use correct sentence structures and vocabulary to explain your preference clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to express emotions through facial expressions. However, if that's not possible, I use social media like FaceTime to stay connected.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains many grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use clear and correct sentences to explain that disagreements happen but you resolve them.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends when our opinions differ. However, we always try to resolve our disagreements and understand each other's points of view.

× With friends chat issue, we will sell everything to friends.

✓ When chatting with friends, we share everything with them.

The phrase 'With friends chat issue' is incorrect and unclear. The preposition 'with' is misused here. The correct expression is 'When chatting with friends'. Also, 'sell everything to friends' is likely a misuse of 'sell' instead of 'share'.

× We are selling each other our toughest time and the funniest moment of them.

✓ We share with each other our toughest times and funniest moments.

The phrase 'selling each other' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'sharing'. Also, 'our toughest time' should be plural 'times' to match 'moments'. 'Of them' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× Without any hesitation and any judging problem we can chat easily with friends.

✓ Without any hesitation or judgment, we can chat easily with friends.

The phrase 'any judging problem' is incorrect; 'judgment' is the correct noun. Also, 'and' should be 'or' to express alternatives. The preposition use is corrected for clarity.

× I usually chat about about the what happening with my life and I am ask asking to my friends of what are the happening, what are to doing in now and the other toughest type in our life.

✓ I usually chat about what is happening in my life and ask my friends about what is happening, what they are doing now, and other difficult things in our lives.

The sentence has multiple preposition errors: 'about about the what happening' is redundant and incorrect; 'ask asking to my friends of' is incorrect, should be 'ask my friends about'; 'what are to doing in now' is incorrect, should be 'what they are doing now'. Also, 'toughest type' is unclear and corrected to 'difficult things'.

× We are selling each other and we are the enjoy and fun with the friends.

✓ We share with each other and enjoy fun times with friends.

'Selling each other' is incorrect; 'share with each other' is appropriate. 'We are the enjoy and fun' is grammatically incorrect; corrected to 'enjoy fun times'. 'With the friends' should be 'with friends'.

× I more prefer the with only one close friend because if the one friend knows he just no, no, no, to me, everything about the mytho, I will said, uh, anything from my side is to to him.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one close friend because if that friend knows me well, I can tell him everything about myself, and I will say anything from my side to him.

The phrase 'I more prefer the with only one close friend' is incorrect; 'I prefer to chat with only one close friend' is correct. The sentence structure is confusing and pronouns are misused. 'He just no, no, no, to me' is unclear and corrected to 'that friend knows me well'. 'I will said' should be 'I will say'. The order and clarity are improved.

× So yeah, I prefer the one no, only one friend close friend, but also in the sometime for.

✓ So yeah, I prefer only one close friend, but sometimes I also prefer more.

The phrase 'the one no, only one friend close friend' is incorrect and unclear; corrected to 'only one close friend'. 'In the sometime for' is incorrect; corrected to 'sometimes I also prefer more' for clarity.

× Yeah, I prefer more is the face to face communication because of the interface to face.

✓ Yeah, I prefer face-to-face communication because of the face-to-face interaction.

'I prefer more is the face to face communication' is incorrect; corrected to 'I prefer face-to-face communication'. 'Because of the interface to face' is incorrect; corrected to 'because of the face-to-face interaction'.

× We are expressing the overthing facial expression and the show is other feelings.

✓ We express everything through facial expressions and show other feelings.

'Expressing the overthing facial expression' is incorrect; corrected to 'express everything through facial expressions'. 'The show is other feelings' is incorrect; corrected to 'show other feelings'.

× But if not possible in the face to face communication, then the social media like the FaceTime video calls like is available nowadays.

✓ But if face-to-face communication is not possible, then social media like FaceTime video calls, which are available nowadays, can be used.

The phrase 'if not possible in the face to face communication' is incorrect; corrected to 'if face-to-face communication is not possible'. 'Like the FaceTime video calls like is available' is incorrect; corrected to 'like FaceTime video calls, which are available'.

× So to via them, uh, we also communicate.

✓ So we also communicate through them.

'So to via them' is incorrect; corrected to 'through them' to indicate the means of communication.

× Yeah, I argue with friends in a some kind of topic like if our opinion and not match not same.

✓ Yeah, I argue with friends on some topics when our opinions do not match.

'Argue with friends in a some kind of topic' is incorrect; corrected to 'argue with friends on some topics'. 'If our opinion and not match not same' is incorrect; corrected to 'when our opinions do not match'.

× So we are arguing each other, but at the at the end we are to solve this problem and and in the new point we are the resolve with them the argument.

✓ So we argue with each other, but in the end, we solve the problem and resolve the argument.

'Arguing each other' is incorrect; corrected to 'argue with each other'. 'At the at the end' is redundant; corrected to 'in the end'. 'We are to solve this problem' is awkward; corrected to 'we solve the problem'. 'In the new point we are the resolve with them the argument' is unclear; corrected to 'resolve the argument'.