Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and use correct grammar, such as 'one of the best things' and 'advice' (uncountable). Also, make your answer more concise and natural by combining ideas smoothly.

例: I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it's a great way to share updates about my work and life. I also appreciate their advice, which helps me a lot.

提案: Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words to organize your ideas clearly. Be specific about topics you discuss and keep sentences complete.

例: Usually, I chat with my best friend about our work, studies, and future plans. We often share what we are going to do next and support each other's goals.

提案: Work on sentence completion and avoid filler words. Use linking words to contrast ideas clearly. Also, correct grammar such as 'an outgoing person' and 'a lot of things'.

例: Although I am an outgoing person and enjoy sharing experiences with many people, I prefer talking to one friend at a time because I can share more personal thoughts.

提案: Reduce filler words and improve sentence flow. Use linking words to compare methods of communication and express your preference clearly.

例: I am comfortable communicating both face-to-face and via social media. However, I prefer meeting in person because it feels more genuine and enjoyable.

提案: Avoid repetition and informal phrases like 'like' and 'little little'. Use more precise vocabulary and structure your answer clearly.

例: I sometimes have minor disagreements with my friends, but we never have serious arguments. These small differences usually help us understand each other better.

× Talking with my friends is, uh, one of the best thing for me to do.

✓ Talking with my friends is, uh, one of the best things for me to do.

The phrase 'one of the best thing' is incorrect because 'one of the' should be followed by a plural noun. Therefore, 'thing' should be pluralized to 'things'.

× And I do take some advices from them as well.

✓ And I do take some advice from them as well.

The word 'advice' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'advices'. The correct form is 'some advice'.

× I do like to talk with people and share experiences. But, uh, in my opinion, I think I am really good when there is only one friend that I'm talking to instead of a group of friends, because with one single friend, I can share a lot of thing and.

✓ I do like to talk with people and share experiences. But, uh, in my opinion, I think I am really good when there is only one friend that I'm talking to instead of a group of friends, because with one single friend, I can share a lot of things and.

The phrase 'a lot of thing' is incorrect because 'a lot of' should be followed by a plural noun when referring to countable items. Therefore, 'thing' should be pluralized to 'things'.

× I do have little disagreements with my friend but I haven't like fought with them or had all like very bad arguments.

✓ I do have little disagreements with my friends but I haven't like fought with them or had all like very bad arguments.

The word 'friend' should be pluralized to 'friends' to agree with the plural pronoun 'them' and the plural noun 'disagreements'. This ensures subject-pronoun agreement and consistency.