Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然，但存在重复和语法错误，如“to relax myself”应为“to relax”。建议简化表达，避免冗余。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax. We often share jokes and talk about interesting news.

提案: 回答中有过多填充词“umm”，且内容重复。建议减少口头语，内容更具体且连贯。

例: We usually chat about our mutual friends, share funny family stories, and discuss daily life events.

提案: 语法错误，如“prefer chat”应为“prefer to chat”，表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的表达，并丰富细节。

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows us to have deeper conversations and share our true feelings.

提案: 回答不完整且有语法错误，口头语较多。建议完整表达观点，减少填充词，注意语法。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication, especially in a relaxed setting like a restaurant, because it helps us connect better and have meaningful conversations.

提案: 回答较好，但存在口头语“UMM”，且表达可以更流畅。建议减少口头语，使用更自然的表达。

例: Yes, sometimes we argue about important topics. Although we have different opinions, our arguments are friendly and help us understand each other better.

× Well, I prefer chat with only one friend because I think we can have a deep conversation and we can change our innermost thought to each other.

✓ Well, I prefer chatting with only one friend because I think we can have a deep conversation and we can share our innermost thoughts with each other.

动词prefer后面应接动名词形式，故将prefer chat改为prefer chatting。

× Well, I prefer chat with only one friend because I think we can have a deep conversation and we can change our innermost thought to each other.

✓ Well, I prefer chatting with only one friend because I think we can have a deep conversation and we can share our innermost thoughts with each other.

动词share后应使用介词with表示“与……分享”，而不是to。

× Well, I prefer chat with only one friend because I think we can have a deep conversation and we can change our innermost thought to each other.

✓ Well, I prefer chatting with only one friend because I think we can have a deep conversation and we can share our innermost thoughts with each other.

thought应为复数形式thoughts，因为内心想法通常不止一个。

× Well, I prefer to chat with my friends face to face because umm, especially in a restaurant, I think we can have a deep conversation and we the atmosphere umm help us to.

✓ Well, I prefer to chat with my friends face to face because, especially in a restaurant, I think we can have a deep conversation and the atmosphere helps us to do so.

短语face to face应写作face to face，且句中缺少主语和谓语，需补充the atmosphere helps us to do so。

× Well, I prefer to chat with my friends face to face because umm, especially in a restaurant, I think we can have a deep conversation and we the atmosphere umm help us to.

✓ Well, I prefer to chat with my friends face to face because, especially in a restaurant, I think we can have a deep conversation and the atmosphere helps us to do so.

主语the atmosphere为单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式helps。