Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and complete by directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence, then adding specific reasons. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and improve sentence structure for clarity.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me feel more secure and supported when I'm feeling down.

提案: Provide a clearer and more natural response by directly stating common topics you discuss, using linking words to connect ideas, and avoiding repetition and filler words.

例: I usually chat with my friends about our current interests, such as music, movies, and other hobbies we enjoy these days.

提案: Clarify your answer by using correct vocabulary and grammar. Explain your preference with specific reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: I prefer talking with one friend because I am an introverted person, so I sometimes feel uncomfortable speaking in a group.

提案: Make your answer more fluent and complete by avoiding filler words, correcting grammar, and explaining your preference with specific reasons and linking words.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it is easier to understand emotions and build a closer connection.

提案: Improve your answer by using more natural expressions, avoiding filler words, and providing a clearer example with linking words to explain the situation.

例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends. For example, when my friend insists on her opinion, I also assert mine to reach an understanding.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friend because when I feel insecure.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because when I feel insecure,

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main clause after 'because'. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context of chatting with multiple people.

× Through talk with my friends I, umm, I feel more comfortable.

✓ Through talking with my friends, I feel more comfortable.

The phrase 'Through talk with my friends' is incorrect; it should be 'Through talking with my friends' to use the gerund form correctly. Also, the sentence needs a comma after the introductory phrase.

× I can manage subject to chat with my friend.

✓ I can manage subjects to chat about with my friends.

The word 'subject' should be plural 'subjects' because it refers to multiple topics. Also, 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match the context.

× Uh, for example, what what are you interested in nowadays? Such as music and movie or something?

✓ Uh, for example, what are you interested in nowadays? Such as music, movies, or something?

The repeated 'what' is an error. Also, 'movie' should be plural 'movies' to match the list format.

× I prefer to talk with one friend because I am a interpret person so I'm uncomfortable talk about the group people sometimes so.

✓ I prefer to talk with one friend because I am an introverted person, so I'm uncomfortable talking about groups of people sometimes.

The word 'interpret' is incorrect; it should be 'introverted'. Also, 'talk' should be 'talking' after 'uncomfortable'. 'Group people' should be 'groups of people'.

× I prefer to communicate to face to face umm because it can more easier.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it can be easier.

The phrase 'communicate to face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'communicate face-to-face'. Also, 'more easier' is incorrect; 'easier' alone is sufficient.

× I can feel intimate intimate feelings and.

✓ I can feel intimate feelings.

The word 'intimate' is repeated unnecessarily. The sentence is incomplete and should end after 'feelings'.

× Umm, my friend insisted her opinion to me.

✓ Umm, my friend insisted on her opinion to me.

The verb 'insist' requires the preposition 'on' when followed by a noun phrase. So, it should be 'insisted on her opinion'.

× Umm, I also assert to her.

✓ Umm, I also assert my opinion to her.

The verb 'assert' needs an object to be complete. Adding 'my opinion' clarifies the meaning.