Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question, using correct grammar, and avoiding redundancy. Also, clarify your points with specific reasons and use linking words to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I definitely enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and pass the time. Moreover, it strengthens our relationships by allowing us to share our feelings and support each other during difficult times.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and contains repetitive and incorrect phrases. Try to be more specific about the topics you discuss and organize your answer logically using linking words. Avoid repetition and use appropriate vocabulary.

例: I usually chat with my friends about my daily life, such as my studies, recent achievements, and interesting things I have seen, like beautiful landscapes. Sharing these moments helps us stay connected.

提案: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'introverted' instead of 'internal waiter') and grammar. Also, structure your answer clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to improve coherence.

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I am an introverted person. When I talk to a group, I often feel nervous. Talking one-on-one helps me build stronger and more comfortable relationships.

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains some awkward phrasing and grammar errors. Try to express your ideas more naturally and use linking words properly. Also, avoid vague expressions like 'and so on' and clarify your points.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows us to understand each other better through body language and facial expressions. In contrast, social media can sometimes create misunderstandings and make it harder to express ourselves genuinely.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct grammar. Also, explain your opinion with specific reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: I rarely argue with my friends about studies or life issues. However, when we do argue, it helps us share our opinions and understand each other better, which strengthens our friendship.

× I think chatting with friends maybe is a way to pass the time.

✓ I think chatting with friends may be a way to pass the time.

The modal verb 'maybe' is incorrectly used here; 'may be' is the correct form to express possibility.

× I think chatting with friends is a essential way to build a formal relationship with them.

✓ I think chatting with friends is an essential way to build a formal relationship with them.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'essential'.

× I like to chatting with them.

✓ I like to chat with them.

After 'like to', the base form of the verb 'chat' should be used, not the '-ing' form.

× Or sometimes I share my moments.

✓ Sometimes I share my moments.

Starting a sentence with 'Or' here is incorrect; it should be removed for proper sentence structure.

× For instance, when I look some beautiful and sincere, I tend to share the beautiful landscape to my friends.

✓ For instance, when I see something beautiful and sincere, I tend to share the beautiful landscape with my friends.

The verb 'look' is incorrect here; 'see' is appropriate. Also, 'share ... to' should be 'share ... with'.

× I tend to share the beautiful landscape to my friends.

✓ I tend to share the beautiful landscape with my friends.

The correct preposition after 'share' is 'with', not 'to'.

× Episodes of that often share my achievements or my daily study or my daily daily snack.

✓ Often, I share my achievements, my daily studies, or my daily snacks.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical; rephrasing improves clarity and grammar.

× Actually, I prefer like to, uh, chat with only one people.

✓ Actually, I prefer to chat with only one person.

'People' is plural; for singular, use 'person'. Also, 'prefer like to' is incorrect; 'prefer to' is correct.

× Uh, you know, I'm an internal waiter person, so when I interacted with a group of people, I'm so afraid of them.

✓ Uh, you know, I'm an introverted person, so when I interact with a group of people, I'm afraid of them.

'Internal waiter person' is incorrect; 'introverted person' is appropriate. Also, tense consistency requires 'interact' instead of 'interacted'. 'So afraid' can be simplified to 'afraid'.

× And I think only one friends build a firm relationship with me.

✓ And I think only one friend builds a firm relationship with me.

'Friends' is plural; 'one' requires singular 'friend'. Also, subject-verb agreement requires 'builds'.

× But I'd prefer like to communicate face to face and firstly, face to face communication facilitates our relationship through the body language and so on.

✓ But I'd prefer to communicate face to face, and firstly, face-to-face communication facilitates our relationship through body language and so on.

'Prefer like to' is incorrect; use 'prefer to'. 'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. 'The body language' should be 'body language' without 'the'.

× And secondly, maybe the social medias is a barrier to impress ourself, you know?

✓ And secondly, maybe social media is a barrier to impress ourselves, you know?

'Social medias' is incorrect; 'social media' is uncountable and singular. 'Ourself' should be 'ourselves'.

× Yes, I seldom argue with my friends in my study or in my life issues.

✓ Yes, I seldom argue with my friends about my studies or life issues.

'In my study' is incorrect; 'about my studies' is appropriate. 'Life issues' does not need 'in'.

× Nevertheless, by arguing with them we have share our role or opinions of something is a way to build a firm relationship with her them.

✓ Nevertheless, arguing with them and sharing our roles or opinions is a way to build a firm relationship with them.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear; rephrasing improves clarity and grammar. 'Have share' is incorrect; 'sharing' is correct. 'Her them' is incorrect; 'them' is sufficient.