Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally relevant but contains some unclear phrases like 'my reason' which affects clarity. Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid redundancy. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows me to share my experiences and discuss our future plans together.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains hesitations and irrelevant phrases like 'Are you cherry cheddar'. Try to respond directly to the question with clear and specific content. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler sounds.

例: Usually, I chat with my friends about recent events in our lives and the hobbies or interests we have developed lately.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Try to form complete sentences and explain your reasons clearly using linking words.

例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I feel more comfortable and can have a deeper conversation compared to talking in a group.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains hesitations and informal expressions like 'MMM' and 'weird'. Try to use more formal and precise language and provide a clear reason with linking words.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I find it more personal and effective, whereas I am not very comfortable using social media for conversations.

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by adding more specific details and using linking words to make it more coherent.

例: Sometimes, I argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions, but we always try to resolve our disagreements through open discussion.

× Yes, I like chatting with friends because I can talk about my reason, life and we also can plan something to do in the future.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends because I can talk about my reasons, life, and we can also plan things to do in the future.

The phrase 'my reason' should be pluralized to 'my reasons' to correctly refer to multiple reasons. Also, 'plan something to do' is awkward; 'plan things to do' is more natural. Additionally, the conjunction 'and' should be followed by a comma before 'we can also plan' to separate the clauses properly.

× Are you cherry cheddar about the things happened in my recent life? And uh, we also chat about, uh, something we like recently. MMM.

✓ Are you curious about the things that happened in my recent life? And, uh, we also chat about things we have liked recently. MMM.

The phrase 'cherry cheddar' is incorrect and likely a mispronunciation of 'curious'. 'The things happened' should be 'the things that happened' to include the relative pronoun 'that'. 'Something we like recently' should be 'things we have liked recently' to correctly express recent preferences.

× I prefer to chat with just one friend because I don't like in a group. The reason is I just not. I just not comfortable being with many people.

✓ I prefer to chat with just one friend because I don't like being in a group. The reason is I am just not comfortable being with many people.

The phrase 'I don't like in a group' is missing the verb 'being'. It should be 'I don't like being in a group'. Also, 'I just not' is incomplete and should be 'I am just not' to form a correct sentence.

× I prefer to talk with people in person because I am not very familiar with talking through the social media. MMM because I just think it is weird.

✓ I prefer to talk with people in person because I am not very familiar with talking through social media. MMM because I just think it is weird.

The phrase 'the social media' is incorrect; 'social media' is an uncountable noun and does not require the definite article 'the'.