Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免重复和语法错误，表达更自然流畅。可以简洁明了地说明喜欢聊天的原因，并举具体例子。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share ideas. For instance, we often discuss ways to improve our studies and earn money, which motivates me a lot.

提案: 回答中应避免重复，使用更准确的表达，并且句子结构要完整。可以用连接词使内容更连贯。

例: As I said, I usually talk with my friends about ways to make money. Besides that, we also enjoy discussing food recipes and how to cook delicious meals.

提案: 回答时应避免语气词和重复，表达要清晰且逻辑连贯。可以更明确地说明原因并用连接词连接句子。

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it is easier to focus on the conversation. Talking in a group can be overwhelming since I have to pay attention to everyone.

提案: 回答中应注意语法和用词准确，避免混淆代词。可以更自然地表达观点并举例说明。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because as an extrovert, I can see people's facial expressions and better understand their feelings.

提案: 回答应避免重复和语气词，表达更简洁自然。可以说明争论的原因和态度，使回答更完整。

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different opinions. However, I think it's normal and helps us understand each other better.

× I'm very into chatting with friends.

✓ I'm very into chatting with friends.

该句中动词形式正确，无需修改。

× For example, I usually chat with my friends how to make money and recently what I did to make money, recently what I learned to get higher scores.

✓ For example, I usually chat with my friends about how to make money, what I did recently to make money, and what I learned recently to get higher scores.

原句缺少介词“about”引导宾语，且句子结构混乱，需调整顺序和添加连接词，使句子更通顺。

× I think it can release our strength from study.

✓ I think it can relieve our stress from studying.

“release our strength from study”表达不准确，应使用“relieve our stress from studying”更符合英语习惯。

× I like chatting with my friend about the topics of making money, earning money.

✓ I like chatting with my friends about topics like making money and earning money.

“friend”应为复数“friends”，因为前文提到的是多个朋友。

× We like to, uh, search how to make made, how to make food delicious more.

✓ We like to, uh, search for how to make food more delicious.

“search”后应加介词“for”，且“make made”错误，应为“make”，并调整词序使表达更自然。

× I prefer with only one friend, uh, that is because one night talking, uh, with uh, a group friends, maybe I can take uh, take care of everybody.

✓ I prefer to talk with only one friend because when talking with a group of friends, maybe I have to take care of everybody.

“a group friends”应为“a group of friends”，且“prefer with”应改为“prefer to talk with”。

× Oh, I prefer to communicate for face to face because I'm a extroverted person and I think when I talk to people face to face, I can say the facial expression on her faces and I can get his understanding.

✓ Oh, I prefer to communicate face to face because I'm an extroverted person and I think when I talk to people face to face, I can see the facial expressions on their faces and understand them better.

“communicate for face to face”应为“communicate face to face”，“a extroverted”应为“an extroverted”，“say the facial expression”应为“see the facial expressions”，“her faces”和“his understanding”应改为“their faces”和“understand them”。

× So we will discuss with this or sometimes maybe, uh, we'll argue, we will argue for this question, but uh, it, it isn't matter, uh.

✓ So we will discuss this, or sometimes maybe we'll argue about this question, but it doesn't matter.

“discuss with this”应为“discuss this”，“argue for this question”应为“argue about this question”，“it isn't matter”应为“it doesn't matter”，句子连接更自然。