Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use more natural phrasing and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of "I like to chat with the friends when I got a free time," say "I like chatting with friends when I have free time." Also, avoid filler words like "uh" and use more precise vocabulary such as "relaxation" instead of "a relax."

例: I enjoy chatting with friends when I have free time because it helps me relax and clear my mind.

提案: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of listing topics abruptly, say "I usually chat with my friends about my daily schedule and events, and we also share our activities and feelings about daily life."

例: I usually chat with my friends about my daily schedule and events, and we also share our activities and feelings about daily life.

提案: Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and plural forms. Also, clarify your answer with linking words. For example, "It depends on the situation, but I certainly prefer chatting with only one friend because we can communicate better and share more openly."

例: It depends on the situation, but I certainly prefer chatting with only one friend because we can communicate better and share more openly.

提案: Improve grammar and sentence clarity. Use linking words to contrast preferences. For example, "It depends on the time. Mostly, I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows better understanding and feels more relaxing. However, sometimes I use social media like phone or email to stay in touch."

例: It depends on the time. Mostly, I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows better understanding and feels more relaxing. However, sometimes I use social media like phone or email to stay in touch.

提案: Avoid contradictory answers and improve clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence and then provide details. For example, "Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends about weekend plans, hobbies, and daily schedules."

例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends about weekend plans, hobbies, and daily schedules.

× I like to chat with the friends when I got a free time.

✓ I like to chat with friends when I have free time.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'friends' and 'free time'. We do not use 'the' when talking about friends in general or uncountable nouns like 'free time'. Also, 'got' should be 'have' to match present tense.

× I like to chat with the friends when I got a free time.

✓ I like to chat with friends when I have free time.

The verb 'got' is in past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'have' to indicate habitual action.

× It gives me a relax, uh, relaxation and helps to convert my mind.

✓ It gives me relaxation and helps to clear my mind.

'a relax' is incorrect because 'relax' is a verb, not a noun. 'Relaxation' is the correct noun form. Also, 'convert my mind' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'clear my mind' to express mental refreshment.

× I usually chat with my friends about my daily schedule, events and and also share some activities and feeling about our daily lives.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about my daily schedule, events, and also share some activities and feelings about our daily lives.

The word 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to match the plural 'activities' and the context of multiple feelings.

× It's depend on the situation, but certainly I prefer to chat with only one friends because we can communicate better and share.

✓ It depends on the situation, but certainly I prefer to chat with only one friend because we can communicate better and share.

'It's depend' should be 'It depends' for subject-verb agreement. 'one friends' is incorrect; 'friend' should be singular after 'one'.

× It's depend on the situation, but certainly I prefer to chat with only one friends because we can communicate better and share.

✓ It depends on the situation, but certainly I prefer to chat with only one friend because we can communicate better and share.

The verb 'depend' must be in third person singular form 'depends' to agree with the subject 'It'.

× It's depends on the time. Mostly I prefer to communicate to face to face because it gives us relaxation and better understanding with each other and sometime also talk on social media through phone or e-mail.

✓ It depends on the time. Mostly I prefer to communicate face to face because it gives us relaxation and better understanding of each other, and sometimes I also talk on social media through phone or e-mail.

'communicate to face to face' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'communicate face to face'. 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, 'talk on social media' needs a subject 'I' for clarity. 'better understanding with each other' should be 'better understanding of each other'.

× No Yes, sometimes I argue with the friends about our weekend plans, hobbies, and related to our daily schedule conversations.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with friends about our weekend plans, hobbies, and topics related to our daily schedule conversations.

The phrase 'No Yes' is contradictory and confusing; it should be 'Yes'. 'the friends' is incorrect when talking generally; 'friends' is better. 'and related to our daily schedule conversations' is incomplete; it should be 'and topics related to our daily schedule conversations' for clarity.