Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to avoid redundancy by not repeating similar words like 'experience' and 'experiences'. Also, complete your sentences to convey full ideas. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax after a hectic day. We often share our daily experiences and funny stories, which makes me feel refreshed and happy.

提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks structure. Avoid repeating phrases like 'I usually talk'. Provide specific examples and use linking words to organize your ideas logically.

例: I usually chat with my best friends about interesting or funny events that happened at work or home. Additionally, we often discuss upcoming events and make plans together.

提案: Your answer conveys your preference but contains hesitations and unclear expressions like '1:00 to 1:00 conversation'. Try to speak more fluently and clearly. Use linking words to contrast your preferences.

例: I prefer one-to-one conversations because they tend to be deep and meaningful. However, I also enjoy chatting with groups of friends, especially during weekends.

提案: Your answer has some unclear phrases like 'face to face stock' and contains many fillers. Try to avoid fillers and use precise vocabulary. Also, organize your answer with linking words to show contrast.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels warmer and allows us to share expressions. However, since we don't always have enough time, we also use social media to stay connected.

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains some hesitations and awkward phrasing like 'quite less' and 'maybe something, uh, we need to clear about'. Use more natural expressions and avoid fillers.

例: Yes, but not often. Sometimes we have constructive arguments about different opinions that help us clear misunderstandings. However, most of the time, we get along well.

× Yes, chatting with my friend is very refreshing for me because after having a hectic day, we feel very rejuvenated after talking and sharing each other daily experience, experiences and funny stories which makes us very.

✓ Yes, chatting with my friends is very refreshing for me because after having a hectic day, we feel very rejuvenated after talking and sharing each other's daily experiences and funny stories which make us very happy.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the plural pronoun 'we'. 'Experience' should be plural 'experiences' to agree with 'daily' and 'sharing each other' should be 'sharing each other's' to show possession. Also, 'makes us very' is incomplete and should be 'make us very happy' to complete the thought and agree with the plural subject 'stories'.

× I usually talk with my best friends and I usually talk about something happened in my work or home, very interesting or funny and something, maybe some event is coming and we need to plan that time those.

✓ I usually talk with my best friends and I usually talk about something that happened at my work or home, something very interesting or funny, and maybe some upcoming event that we need to plan for.

The phrase 'something happened' needs a relative pronoun 'that' to connect the clause. 'In my work or home' should be 'at my work or home' because 'at' is the correct preposition for locations like work and home. The sentence structure is awkward and incomplete; it needs to be rephrased for clarity and correctness.

× I like deep and meaningful conversation, which I can get from 1:00 to 1:00 conversation. So I prefer one to one conversation most. But umm, we also, uh, I also like to talk a group of friends, uh, in uh, maybe in weekends.

✓ I like deep and meaningful conversations, which I can get from one-to-one conversations. So I prefer one-to-one conversations the most. But umm, I also like to talk with a group of friends, maybe on weekends.

The word 'conversation' should be plural 'conversations' to match the context. '1:00 to 1:00 conversation' is unclear and should be 'one-to-one conversations'. 'Talk a group of friends' is missing the preposition 'with'. 'In weekends' should be 'on weekends' as 'on' is the correct preposition for days and weekends.

× I feel, uh, face to face stock is more convenient and more warming and we can share, uh, our expression also, although we don't get enough time to spend time face to face. So, umm, we also share our thoughts by using social media.

✓ I feel, uh, face-to-face talk is more convenient and warmer and we can share our expressions as well, although we don't get enough time to spend face-to-face. So, umm, we also share our thoughts by using social media.

The phrase 'face to face stock' is incorrect; it should be 'face-to-face talk'. 'More warming' should be 'warmer' as it is a comparative adjective. 'Share our expression' should be plural 'expressions'. 'Spend time face to face' is better as 'spend face-to-face time' or 'spend time face-to-face'.

× Yes, but quite less actually. Sometimes we argue about different opinions, which is very constructive, maybe something, uh, we need to clear about, but most of the time we don't argue.

✓ Yes, but quite rarely actually. Sometimes we argue about different opinions, which is very constructive, maybe about something we need to clear up, but most of the time we don't argue.

'Quite less' is incorrect; 'quite rarely' or 'not often' is better. 'Something we need to clear about' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'something we need to clear up'. The modal verb 'need to' is correctly used but the preposition 'about' is misplaced.