Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'it's makes me' to 'it makes me' and avoid redundancy like 'feel feeling good'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me feel happy. They are amazing people, and we always have interesting topics to discuss. Moreover, we often joke around, which makes our conversations very enjoyable.

提案: Avoid filler words and be more specific in your answer. Use linking words to organize your ideas clearly. For example, mention specific topics and explain briefly why you discuss them.

例: We usually talk about our daily lives and university-related topics because they affect us directly. Additionally, we sometimes discuss our relationships, such as boyfriends, to share advice and experiences.

提案: Improve sentence structure and grammar, such as 'which are very close with with each other' to 'who are very close to each other'. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and avoid repetition.

例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because my group consists of four close friends who respect each other's opinions. Therefore, I enjoy discussing various topics with all of them together.

提案: Correct grammar errors such as 'it's makes me' to 'it makes me' and avoid filler words. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons for your preference.

例: I obviously prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to express emotions better and observe others' reactions. Therefore, I believe face-to-face interaction is more effective than social media.

提案: Avoid repetition and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to explain reasons logically. For example, explain why disagreements happen and that they are normal in friendships.

例: Sometimes I argue with my friends because it is normal to have different opinions. Since we are individuals, disagreements happen occasionally, but they help us understand each other better.

× Yes, I do like chatting with my friend because it's makes me feel feeling good.

✓ Yes, I do like chatting with my friend because it makes me feel good.

The phrase 'it's makes' is incorrect because 'it' (third person singular) should be followed by 'makes' without 'is'. Also, 'feeling good' is redundant here; 'feel good' is the correct expression.

× Uh, they're amazing people.

✓ Uh, they are amazing people.

Contraction 'they're' is correct but in spoken form. No grammatical error here, so no correction needed.

× We have so much uh, things to talk about umm,

✓ We have so many things to talk about,

'Much' is used with uncountable nouns, while 'things' is countable plural, so 'many' should be used instead of 'much'.

× and chatting with them is always umm, makes me feel great because we always make fun of something or.

✓ and chatting with them always makes me feel great because we always make fun of something.

'Is always makes' is incorrect; 'makes' alone is sufficient as the verb. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed to be finished properly.

× Uh, we usually talk about our daily life or university things, what we usually do in our everyday life.

✓ Uh, we usually talk about our daily lives or university things, what we usually do in our everyday life.

'Life' should be plural 'lives' when referring to multiple people.

× Uh, so yeah, no, we umm, chat like this kind of things, but also if some of us have some boyfriend things we also are talking about like this.

✓ Uh, so yeah, no, we umm, chat about these kinds of things, but also if some of us have boyfriends, we also talk about that.

'Chat like this kind of things' is incorrect; 'chat about these kinds of things' is correct. 'Boyfriend things' is vague; 'have boyfriends' is clearer. Also, 'are talking' should be 'talk' for habitual action.

× I prefer a group of people because in my friend group we are four people which are very close with with each other and we respect our thoughts and each other's minds.

✓ I prefer a group of people because in my friend group we are four people who are very close to each other and we respect our thoughts and each other's minds.

'Which' should be 'who' when referring to people. Also, 'close with with each other' should be 'close to each other'.

× So I prefer talk and chat with them.

✓ So I prefer to talk and chat with them.

'Prefer' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to talk' rather than the base form 'talk'.

× Obviously face to face because it's makes me feel like to talk more emotional and see umm other people's reaction about some kind of things.

✓ Obviously face to face because it makes me feel like talking more emotionally and seeing other people's reactions about some kinds of things.

'It's makes' is incorrect; 'it makes' is correct. 'Feel like to talk' should be 'feel like talking'. 'More emotional' should be 'more emotionally' as an adverb. 'Reaction' should be plural 'reactions' to match 'other people's'. 'Some kind of things' should be 'some kinds of things'.

× So the face to face is always good idea for communicate.

✓ So face-to-face communication is always a good idea.

'The face to face' is incorrect; 'face-to-face communication' is the correct noun phrase. 'For communicate' should be 'a good idea' or 'good for communication'.

× Sometimes, yeah, because it's also normal, normal things to argue with a with a friend, because we are in individuals for ourselves.

✓ Sometimes, yeah, because it's also normal to argue with a friend, because we are individuals on our own.

'Normal, normal things' is redundant; 'normal to argue' is correct. 'In individuals for ourselves' is incorrect; 'individuals on our own' or 'individuals by ourselves' is better.

× So we have a different point of view in some point.

✓ So we have different points of view at some points.

'A different point of view in some point' is incorrect; plural 'points of view' and 'at some points' is correct.

× So we have of course something we didn't agree with each other.

✓ So we have, of course, some things we don't agree on with each other.

'Something' should be plural 'some things' to match the context. 'Didn't agree with each other' should be 'don't agree on with each other' for present tense and correct preposition.

× So sometimes we are arguing.

✓ So sometimes we argue.

'Are arguing' is present continuous, but for habitual actions, simple present 'argue' is appropriate.