Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and detailed. Try to avoid redundancy and add a bit more explanation to make your response richer.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my close friends. Usually, we meet at a cafe on weekends where we catch up and share our experiences.

提案: Your answer covers the topic but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use linking words and be more specific about the topics you discuss.

例: We usually talk about various topics, ranging from our daily lives to challenges we face at work or in our studies.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas and express your opinion more clearly and naturally.

例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because group conversations tend to be superficial, and I find it hard to open up deeply when there are many people.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity.

例: I prefer communicating through social media because it's more engaging; I can share smiling photos and videos easily online.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions, and avoid repetition.

例: Yes, sometimes we argue when we have different opinions, but we always stay polite and respectful to each other.

× Well, we chat about almost everything from the from our daily life to the problem we met in the work or study.

✓ Well, we chat about almost everything from our daily life to the problems we meet at work or study.

The phrase 'from the from our daily life' contains a repeated preposition 'from the' which is incorrect. Also, 'the problem' should be plural 'problems' to match 'almost everything' and 'we met' should be present tense 'we meet' to align with the habitual action. 'In the work or study' should be 'at work or study' because 'at' is the correct preposition for locations like work or study.

× Well, we chat about almost everything from the from our daily life to the problem we met in the work or study.

✓ Well, we chat about almost everything from our daily life to the problems we meet at work or study.

The word 'problem' should be plural 'problems' because it refers to multiple issues encountered in work or study contexts.

× Well, we chat about almost everything from the from our daily life to the problem we met in the work or study.

✓ Well, we chat about almost everything from our daily life to the problems we meet at work or study.

The verb 'met' is past tense, but since the sentence describes habitual actions, the present tense 'meet' is appropriate.

× I prefer to chat with just one friend because I think chat with a group of people are very facial level and because I cannot open up myself deeply while I face many people.

✓ I prefer to chat with just one friend because I think chatting with a group of people is very superficial and because I cannot open up deeply when I face many people.

'Chat' should be 'chatting' to function as a gerund here. 'Are' should be 'is' because the subject 'chatting with a group of people' is singular. 'Facial level' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'superficial'. 'Open up myself deeply' is awkward; 'open up deeply' is better. 'While I face many people' is better expressed as 'when I face many people'.

× I prefer to chat with just one friend because I think chat with a group of people are very facial level and because I cannot open up myself deeply while I face many people.

✓ I prefer to chat with just one friend because I think chatting with a group of people is very superficial and because I cannot open up deeply when I face many people.

'Chat' should be in the gerund form 'chatting' after 'think' to act as the subject of the clause.

× I prefer to chat with just one friend because I think chat with a group of people are very facial level and because I cannot open up myself deeply while I face many people.

✓ I prefer to chat with just one friend because I think chatting with a group of people is very superficial and because I cannot open up deeply when I face many people.

'Facial level' is not a correct expression; the intended meaning is 'superficial', which is the correct adjective to describe shallow interactions.

× I prefer to chat with just one friend because I think chat with a group of people are very facial level and because I cannot open up myself deeply while I face many people.

✓ I prefer to chat with just one friend because I think chatting with a group of people is very superficial and because I cannot open up deeply when I face many people.

'Open up myself deeply' is incorrect; reflexive pronoun 'myself' is unnecessary here. The correct phrase is 'open up deeply'.

× I prefer to communicate via social media as it's more interesting than face to face because I can send like smiling photos or even videos via communicating on the Internet.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media as it's more interesting than face to face because I can send smiling photos or even videos through communication on the Internet.

The phrase 'send like smiling photos' is awkward; 'like' is unnecessary. Also, 'via communicating on the Internet' is incorrect; 'through communication on the Internet' or simply 'online' is better.

× I prefer to communicate via social media as it's more interesting than face to face because I can send like smiling photos or even videos via communicating on the Internet.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media as it's more interesting than face to face because I can send smiling photos or even videos through communication on the Internet.

'Like' is incorrectly used before 'smiling photos'; it should be omitted to correctly quantify the photos.

× Yeah, sometimes I do, especially when we hold different perspectives. But our argued are not going to hurt each other. But keep polite and respect, respect.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I do, especially when we hold different perspectives. But our arguments are not going to hurt each other. We keep polite and respectful.

'Argued' is a past tense verb, but here a noun 'arguments' is needed. Also, 'keep polite and respect' is incorrect; it should be 'keep polite and respectful' or 'remain polite and respectful'.