Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then explain why you like chatting with friends using clear and concise sentences. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.

例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps me improve my communication skills. Also, there are many useful apps that make chatting easy and fun.

提案: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and slightly unclear. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repeating words unnecessarily. Also, clarify your points with concise sentences.

例: I usually chat with my friends about Formula One because we all enjoy this motorsport. We often discuss who will be the champion since the season is about to end, and we find watching the races very exciting.

提案: Your answer is somewhat confusing and lacks clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your preference with specific reasons. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: To be honest, I prefer chatting one-on-one with my best friend because we know each other well. This allows us to discuss personal and interesting topics more comfortably.

提案: Your answer has many fillers and hesitations which affect fluency. Try to speak more confidently and clearly. Also, organize your ideas logically using linking words.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it is easier to understand the other person and build a stronger connection. Meeting in person allows for better interaction and expression.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains errors. Make sure to use correct vocabulary and grammar. Provide a direct answer and support it with clear reasons or examples.

例: I don't usually argue with my friends because we have a friendly relationship. We support each other and try to avoid conflicts.

× Yes, all I really thought of it because you improve your communication skills and you have many good features and apps when you where you chat with your friends.

✓ Yes, I really think so because you improve your communication skills and you have many good features and apps where you can chat with your friends.

The phrase 'thought of it' is incorrect here; the correct expression is 'think so' to express agreement. Also, 'when you where you chat' is incorrect; it should be 'where you can chat' to indicate the place or platform for chatting.

× It is the motorsport and my friends also like this sport, Motorsport, I mean, and we usually chat about it, who is The Who will be the champion because the season in this sport is going to conclude.

✓ It is a motorsport and my friends also like this sport, Motorsport, I mean, and we usually chat about who will be the champion because the season in this sport is going to conclude.

The phrase 'It is the motorsport' should be 'It is a motorsport' because 'motorsport' is a general category, not a specific one. Also, 'chat about it, who is The Who will be the champion' is awkward; it should be 'chat about who will be the champion' to correctly link the clauses.

× So to tell the truth, I really prefer to be. Individual with your mate maybe your best friend because you can discuss many things that you know about each other, or interesting things because you're best friends and you have your own like theme to communicate.

✓ So to tell the truth, I really prefer to be an individual with my mate, maybe my best friend, because you can discuss many things that you know about each other, or interesting things because you're best friends and you have your own theme to communicate.

The phrase 'prefer to be. Individual' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to be an individual' with the article 'an'. Also, 'your mate' should be 'my mate' to maintain first person perspective. 'Your own like theme' is awkward; 'your own theme' is clearer.

× So I really prefer, uh, to, uh, communicate in real life because, uh, yeah, it is, it is very, uh, simpler to, uh, inquire many things about the person to introduce yourself as well.

✓ So I really prefer to communicate in real life because it is much simpler to inquire about many things about the person and to introduce yourself as well.

The verb 'inquire' requires the preposition 'about' when referring to topics or things. Also, 'simpler to inquire many things' is awkward; 'simpler to inquire about many things' is correct.

× And it may be, uh, enhance your contact with the person when you see each other.

✓ And it may enhance your contact with the person when you see each other.

The phrase 'may be, uh, enhance' is incorrect; it should be 'may enhance' without 'be'. This is a modal verb usage issue but mainly a verb form issue.

× So these shoes our company haven't got a lot of. Conflicts and that is why I don't usually argue with them.

✓ So these days our company hasn't got a lot of conflicts and that is why I don't usually argue with them.

The phrase 'these shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'these days' to indicate a time period. Also, 'haven't got' should be 'hasn't got' because 'company' is singular. 'A lot of. Conflicts' should be 'a lot of conflicts' without the period.