Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，例如“get out of touch with them”应为“keep in touch with them”，且“diary diet”表达不准确。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和口头语。

例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps me keep in touch with them and share my daily experiences.

提案: 回答内容不够具体，表达含糊且有语法错误，如“the option of the professional”不明确。建议使用具体话题并用连词连接，使表达更连贯。

例: We usually talk about our recent feelings, work experiences, and share recommendations about new restaurants we have tried.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整且不连贯。建议使用完整句子，明确表达偏好，并用连接词使句子流畅。

例: It depends on the occasion. Sometimes I prefer chatting with a group because the atmosphere is lively, but other times I like talking to one friend for more private conversations.

提案: 回答中断且重复口头语较多，表达不完整。建议简洁明了地说明理由，并避免重复。

例: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see facial expressions and understand emotions better.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“there is nothing mattered”应为“nothing really matters”。建议用更自然的表达方式说明原因。

例: I seldom argue with my friends because I prefer to avoid conflicts; I don't like feeling nervous or uncomfortable in those situations.

× I like chatting with my friends because I think it is really a good way to get out of touch with them and umm, I think it is umm, a diary diet, uh, schedule for me now.

✓ I like chatting with my friends because I think it is really a good way to keep in touch with them and umm, I think it is umm, a daily diet, uh, schedule for me now.

短语“get out of touch with”用法错误，正确表达应为“keep in touch with”，表示保持联系。此外，“diary diet”应为“daily diet”，表示日常安排。

× Sometimes if I wanna or relax myself I will chat with a group of people because atmosphere is really active.

✓ Sometimes if I want to relax myself I will chat with a group of people because the atmosphere is really active.

“wanna”是口语缩写，正式表达应为“want to”。“atmosphere”前缺少定冠词“the”，表示特定的氛围。

× But if I wanna reserve some suggestion I will find what.

✓ But if I want to reserve some suggestions I will find someone.

“suggestion”应为复数“suggestions”，且“find what”表达不清，应改为“find someone”或“find something”以表达寻找建议的意思。

× Umm, it's definitely face to face because I think, uh, if we use social media, we can't, uh, see their, uh, expression or other things.

✓ Umm, it's definitely face to face because I think, uh, if we use social media, we can't, uh, see their, uh, expressions or other things.

“expression”应为复数“expressions”，因为通常指多种表情。

× If we are facing face to face, uh, we can, uh, get the.

✓ If we are face to face, uh, we can, uh, get the expressions.

“facing face to face”结构不正确，应改为“are face to face”。句子末尾不完整，应补充完整内容。

× Seldom, because I always avoid conflicts because there is nothing mattered, really mattered.

✓ Seldom, because I always avoid conflicts because nothing really matters.

“there is nothing mattered”语法错误，应为“nothing really matters”，表示“没有什么真正重要的”。

× So I think I don't like the atmosphere, feel nervous.

✓ So I think I don't like the atmosphere; it makes me feel nervous.

句子缺少主语，导致表达不完整，应补充“it makes me”使句子完整。