Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且注意时态和词汇的准确使用。

例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps me relax when I am tired and makes me feel happy.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议直接回答问题，使用连贯的句子，并且提供具体细节。

例: We usually talk about our daily lives, dreams, and travel plans because I often travel with my friends.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，存在语法错误，建议使用更准确的词汇表达观点，并且避免重复。

例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because it feels more private and comfortable.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，建议简化句子结构，明确表达偏好，并说明原因。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to share personal things more easily.

提案: 回答中时态使用不当，表达不够连贯，建议使用正确时态并且更清晰地表达观点。

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, but it's usually a small issue and can be quite funny in daily life.

× Because I definitely like chatting with my friends umm when I am so tired I always to chat with my friends because they this makes me happy and relaxed and I can get more things written.

✓ Because I definitely like chatting with my friends. Umm, when I am so tired, I always chat with my friends because this makes me happy and relaxed and I can get more things written.

句中出现了不正确的动词形式“always to chat”，应改为“always chat”。此外，句子结构较为混乱，建议分句表达更清晰。

× With my friends, I always chat. I always chat at my about our daily life, our dreams and our travel.

✓ With my friends, I always chat about our daily life, our dreams and our travel.

短语“chat at my about”中“at my”使用错误，应直接用“chat about”表示“聊天关于”。

× I think we often argued with my friends, but it is OK, it's just a little bit problem.

✓ I think we often argue with my friends, but it is OK, it's just a little bit problem.

句中“argued”使用了过去式，但句意表达的是经常发生的事情，应使用一般现在时“argue”。

× So I think it is no more.

✓ So I think it is no big deal.

“no more”用法不当，表达“没什么大不了”的意思应使用“no big deal”或类似表达。

× And in our daily life argument is more like funny.

✓ And in our daily life, arguments are more like funny.

“argument”应使用复数形式“arguments”，且句子缺少冠词，且“more like funny”表达不自然，建议改为“are more like funny”。