Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat off-topic because you mention shopping instead of chatting. Try to focus directly on the question about chatting. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share my feelings. Moreover, talking with them strengthens our friendship and makes me feel supported.

提案: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and slightly repetitive. Try to complete your sentences and provide specific examples. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

例: We usually chat about our daily experiences, such as work challenges and personal life events. For example, I often share my recent achievements at work, which helps me express my emotions and get advice.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by avoiding repetition and using linking words for coherence. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary and provide a brief example.

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows me to express my personal thoughts and feelings more freely. In contrast, group conversations can be less intimate and more restricted.

提案: Good answer with clear contrast and reasons. To improve, correct minor grammar errors and use linking words like 'however' to enhance coherence.

例: It depends; when I'm busy and don't have time to meet friends or family, I prefer communicating via social media. However, when I have free time, I choose face-to-face communication because it allows better expression and understanding.

提案: Your answer is confusing and contains contradictions. Also, the last sentence is incomplete. Try to clarify your ideas, avoid double negatives, and complete your thoughts with linking words.

例: I don't like to argue with my friends, although we sometimes have disagreements. Usually, I calmly explain my point of view and listen to theirs so that we can understand each other better.

× Whenever I had a chat with my friends, it's a good thing to communicate.

✓ Whenever I have a chat with my friends, it's a good thing to communicate.

The sentence mixes past tense 'had' with present tense 'it's'. Since the context is general and habitual, present tense 'have' should be used for consistency.

× We usually chat about our daily experiences, professional achievement and personal life.

✓ We usually chat about our daily experiences, professional achievements and personal life.

The noun 'achievement' should be plural 'achievements' to match the plural context of 'experiences' and to correctly refer to multiple achievements.

× Chatting with my friends allows me to channel my emotions and share all the things that I.

✓ Chatting with my friends allows me to channel my emotions and share all the things that I feel.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb after 'I'. Adding 'feel' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I I'm able to express my personal thoughts, my sorrows and all the feelings that I'm having.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I'm able to express my personal thoughts, my sorrows and all the feelings that I'm having.

The phrase 'I I'm' is redundant and incorrect. Removing the extra 'I' corrects the pronoun usage.

× And like when I'm with a group of people, I am restricted to do so.

✓ And when I'm with a group of people, I am restricted from doing so.

The phrase 'restricted to do so' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'from' followed by the gerund form 'doing'.

× It depends, when I'm busy and doesn't have a time to meet my friends or family, I would prefer to communicate via social media.

✓ It depends, when I'm busy and don't have time to meet my friends or family, I would prefer to communicate via social media.

The subject 'I' requires the verb 'don't' instead of 'doesn't'. Also, 'a time' is incorrect; 'time' is uncountable here and should be used without 'a'.

× But when I have time, I would rather communicate face to face because I can express more and be understood when we are talking.

✓ But when I have time, I would rather communicate face-to-face because I can express more and be understood when we are talking.

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adverb.

× I don't like to agree with my friends but sometimes we have some disagreements but I still don't argue with them.

✓ I don't like to argue with my friends but sometimes we have some disagreements; however, I still don't argue with them.

The original sentence incorrectly says 'I don't like to agree' which contradicts the intended meaning. It should be 'I don't like to argue'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by replacing the second 'but' with a semicolon and 'however' for clarity.

× I usually just talk and explain myself and let her explain her side as well so we can.

✓ I usually just talk and explain myself and let her explain her side as well so we can understand each other.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding 'understand each other' completes the thought and clarifies the meaning.