Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınız doğal ancak gereksiz tekrarlar ve dolgu kelimeleri içeriyor. Daha akıcı ve etkili olmak için dolgu kelimelerinden kaçının ve cümlenizi doğrudan kurun.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because we often share details about our daily routines and interesting events that happened during the day.

提案: Cevabınızda bazı kelime seçimleri ve yapılar daha doğal hale getirilebilir. Ayrıca 'etcetera' yerine daha spesifik örnekler vermek daha etkili olur.

例: We usually discuss our daily routines and any unusual events at school. Additionally, we enjoy talking about our favorite topics like movies and music.

提案: Cümlenizde bazı ifadeler anlam açısından belirsiz ve tekrarlar mevcut. Daha net ve akıcı ifadeler kullanarak düşüncelerinizi daha iyi ifade edebilirsiniz.

例: I enjoy chatting both in groups and one-on-one, but I prefer talking with a single friend because it allows for deeper and more meaningful conversations.

提案: Cümlenizde bazı tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha kısa ve net cümleler kurarak düşüncelerinizi daha etkili ifade edebilirsiniz.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I like to look into the eyes of the person I'm talking to. However, for introverted people, social media might be a better option.

提案: Cümlenizde bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. Daha düzgün ve akıcı cümleler kurarak kendinizi daha iyi ifade edebilirsiniz.

例: I usually avoid arguments because I'm not that kind of person. However, if a disagreement occurs, I try to understand the other person's perspective and work towards resolving the issue soon.

× we share so many things which are with each other

✓ we share so many things with each other

The phrase 'which are with each other' is incorrect because 'which are' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The correct preposition 'with' should directly connect 'share' and 'each other'. The corrected sentence is 'we share so many things with each other.'

× We love to talk about the things that we love, especially movies, musics and etcetera.

✓ We love to talk about the things that we love, especially movies, music, and so on.

The word 'musics' is incorrect because 'music' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Also, 'etcetera' is better replaced with 'and so on' or omitted for clarity. The corrected sentence uses 'music' and 'and so on' appropriately.

× Since I'm an extra work person, it doesn't matter for me.

✓ Since I'm an extroverted person, it doesn't matter to me.

The phrase 'extra work person' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'extroverted person.' Also, the correct preposition is 'to me' instead of 'for me' in this context. The correction clarifies the meaning and fixes the preposition.

× Cause meanwhile talking with only friend helps to talk, helps to talk about some deep conversations.

✓ Because talking with only one friend helps to have deep conversations.

The phrase 'Cause meanwhile' is informal and unclear; 'Because' is more appropriate. 'Only friend' should be 'only one friend' for clarity. The repetition 'helps to talk, helps to talk' is redundant and should be simplified. The corrected sentence is clearer and grammatically correct.

× But my personal choice is to be face to face since I love to look in deeper deep in the eyes of the person that I'm talking to.

✓ But my personal choice is to be face to face since I love to look deeper into the eyes of the person that I'm talking to.

The phrase 'look in deeper deep in the eyes' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'look deeper into the eyes.' The preposition 'into' is necessary to indicate direction, and 'deeper' is the correct comparative adverb here. The correction improves clarity and grammar.

× Not since that I'm not that kind of person.

✓ No, since I'm not that kind of person.

The phrase 'Not since that' is incorrect. The correct response to a question about frequency is 'No' or 'Not really.' The phrase 'since that' is unnecessary and ungrammatical here. The correction provides a natural and grammatically correct response.

× I'm I don't prefer to argue, but if there's an argument, I would like to see from the person's perspective that I'm arguing and try to solve that problem in the near future.

✓ I don't prefer to argue, but if there's an argument, I try to see the other person's perspective and try to solve the problem in the near future.

The phrase 'I'm I don't prefer' is incorrect and redundant; 'I don't prefer' suffices. Also, 'see from the person's perspective that I'm arguing' is unclear; it should be 'see the other person's perspective.' The correction clarifies pronoun use and improves sentence structure.