Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và liên kết các ý với nhau.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax after a long day at work. I usually share details about my day and listen to their stories, which makes me feel cared for and supported.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy cung cấp các chi tiết cụ thể hơn về chủ đề bạn thường nói chuyện và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: My friends and I usually chat about various topics, such as our daily lives, our children, and places we have visited. We don't stick to one topic; instead, we talk about whatever comes to mind.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ. Bạn nên dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I enjoy hearing different points of view. This helps me gain a broader understanding of the topics I am curious about.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết ý tưởng bằng từ nối phù hợp.

例: I think it depends on the situation. For important matters, I prefer face-to-face conversations because they are more personal. However, for everyday topics, communicating via social media is convenient.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn còn lộn xộn và khó hiểu. Bạn nên sắp xếp ý tưởng rõ ràng, dùng câu ngắn gọn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để truyền đạt ý một cách hiệu quả.

例: Sometimes my friends and I have disagreements, and we argue about certain things. However, these arguments help us understand each other better and strengthen our friendship.

× That's definitely it's helped me to relax and unwind me after a long day at work chatting with my friend.

✓ That's definitely helped me to relax and unwind after a long day at work chatting with my friend.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'it's' and 'me' redundantly. 'It's' (it is) is unnecessary here, and 'unwind' should not be followed by 'me'. The correct form is 'helped me to relax and unwind'.

× Either way I can sharing them about my daily my day at work.

✓ Either way I can share with them about my day at work.

The verb 'sharing' is incorrectly used after 'can'; modal verbs should be followed by the base form of the verb, so 'sharing' should be 'share'. Also, 'sharing them' is incorrect; it should be 'share with them'. The phrase 'my daily my day' is redundant; 'my day' suffices.

× And feel I am cared.

✓ And I feel cared for.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb structure. 'Feel I am cared' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I feel cared for' to convey the intended meaning.

× I and my friend talk about everything in the world.

✓ My friend and I talk about everything in the world.

The correct order is 'My friend and I' rather than 'I and my friend'. This is a standard English convention for pronoun order.

× It's not a consistent topic, just something off on top of our heads, some setting about our daily life, our child, our places.

✓ It's not a consistent topic, just something off the top of our heads, like things about our daily life, our children, our places.

The phrase 'off on top of our heads' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'off the top of our heads'. 'Our child' should be plural 'our children' if referring to more than one child or 'our child' if singular, but 'some setting about' is unclear and corrected to 'like things about'.

× For me, I would prefer to chat with the group of people because I would love to hear many points of view from different people that will help me have a general view about the thing I wonder.

✓ For me, I would prefer to chat with a group of people because I would love to hear many points of view from different people that will help me have a general view about the things I wonder about.

The article 'the' before 'group of people' is incorrect; it should be 'a group of people' as it is not a specific group. Also, 'the thing I wonder' is vague and should be pluralized and clarified as 'the things I wonder about'.

× I think it depend on the circumstance.

✓ I think it depends on the circumstance.

The verb 'depend' should be in third person singular form 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× For example if something happen important thing it's better to face to face conversations but indicate it's just regarding about the life.

✓ For example, if something important happens, it's better to have face-to-face conversations, but if it's just about daily life, then social media is fine.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Something happen important thing' is incorrect; it should be 'something important happens'. 'Face to face conversations' needs 'have' and hyphens: 'face-to-face conversations'. 'Indicate it's just regarding about the life' is unclear and corrected to 'if it's just about daily life'.

× This sometimes I and my friend have some disagreement about something and we agree I make argument about it.

✓ Sometimes my friend and I have some disagreements about something, and we agree to argue about it.

The phrase 'This sometimes I and my friend' is incorrect; it should be 'Sometimes my friend and I'. 'We agree I make argument' is incorrect; it should be 'we agree to argue'.

× But it also a way to to make us understand each other after arguments so it not.

✓ But it is also a way to help us understand each other after arguments, so it's not bad.

The sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'It also a way' needs 'is'. 'To to' is a typo. 'Make us understand' is better as 'help us understand'. The ending 'so it not' is incomplete and corrected to 'so it's not bad'.