Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and improving sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I love chatting with my friends because it helps me relax. We often discuss my relationships and daily life, which makes our conversations meaningful and enjoyable.

提案: Focus on grammatical accuracy and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid incomplete sentences. Be specific about your feelings and experiences.

例: I usually chat about my daily life, such as challenges I face at work and school. Sharing my problems with friends helps me feel relaxed and supported.

提案: Improve sentence clarity and completeness. Avoid vague endings and use linking words to explain your preferences clearly.

例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because it feels more comfortable and private. In a group, there are many different opinions, which can be overwhelming.

提案: Work on grammar and sentence flow. Use linking words to connect ideas and express your feelings more naturally.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see people's emotions and understand their thoughts better. This makes me feel closer to them compared to texting on a phone.

提案: Improve grammatical accuracy and sentence structure. Use linking words to explain the benefits of arguing clearly and naturally.

例: Yes, I do argue with my friends because having different perspectives helps us see things differently. This way, we can avoid sticking to our own opinions and learn from each other.

× I usually talk to them about my relationship with my boyfriend and my families, and I will talk about them, talk about my daily life with them.

✓ I usually talk to them about my relationship with my boyfriend and my family, and I will talk about them, talk about my daily life with them.

The word 'families' is incorrect here because it refers to multiple families, but the speaker likely means their own family, which is singular. Therefore, 'family' should be used instead of 'families'.

× It was really kind of relaxing to talk with my friends.

✓ It is really kind of relaxing to talk with my friends.

The sentence refers to a general or habitual action, so the present tense 'is' is more appropriate than the past tense 'was'.

× Talking to them about my problems make me feel relaxed and make me feel there's.

✓ Talking to them about my problems makes me feel relaxed and makes me feel there is.

The subject 'Talking to them about my problems' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' instead of 'make' to agree in number. Also, 'there's' is a contraction of 'there is' and should be written fully for clarity.

× what am I going through in my school.

✓ what I am going through in my school.

In indirect questions or statements, the word order should be subject + verb, not verb + subject. Therefore, 'what I am going through' is correct instead of 'what am I going through'.

× Talking to them about my problems make me feel relaxed and make me feel there's.

✓ Talking to them about my problems makes me feel relaxed and makes me feel there is.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'Talking to them about my problems'. Also, 'there's' should be expanded to 'there is' for clarity.

× I like to talk to a person in the time because I don't like people always judging me about what I am talking about.

✓ I like to talk to a person at a time because I don't like people always judging me about what I am talking about.

The phrase 'in the time' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'at a time' to indicate one person at a time.

× So yes, I like to chat with.

✓ So yes, I like to chat with them.

The sentence ends abruptly without an object pronoun. 'Chat with' requires an object, so 'them' should be added to complete the sentence.

× I prefer to communicate face to face.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face.

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated when used as an adverb or adjective, so 'face-to-face' is correct.

× I like to talk to people when we are facing to each other 'cause I can't know what they are thinking about and I can take a look at their emotions

✓ I like to talk to people when we are facing each other because I can know what they are thinking about and I can take a look at their emotions.

The preposition 'to' after 'facing' is incorrect; 'facing each other' is correct. Also, 'cause' should be 'because' for formal correctness. Additionally, 'I can't know' is incorrect; it should be 'I can know' to express the intended meaning.

× That made me feel like we are more closer instead of typing on the cell phone.

✓ That made me feel like we are closer instead of typing on the cell phone.

The word 'more' is unnecessary before the comparative adjective 'closer'. 'Closer' alone is sufficient.

× By having different perspectives made us look things in a different way and we won't stay in our own opinion.

✓ Having different perspectives makes us look at things in a different way and we won't stay in our own opinion.

The phrase 'By having different perspectives made us' is incorrect; it should be 'Having different perspectives makes us' to maintain present tense and correct sentence structure. Also, 'look things' should be 'look at things'.