Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn, tránh lỗi phát âm và từ ngữ không chính xác như 'jetting W friend'. Nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us strengthen our relationships by sharing different topics.

提案: Câu trả lời nên sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và tránh lặp từ như 'discuss'. Nên cụ thể hơn về các chủ đề và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

例: We usually talk about current events and our studies, especially how to solve exercises. Besides that, we sometimes have deep conversations about our personal lives.

提案: Câu trả lời cần hoàn chỉnh hơn, tránh ngắt quãng và sử dụng từ nối để câu mạch lạc. Nên kết thúc câu rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ như 'uh'.

例: It depends on the topic. If I want to discuss studies or life events, I prefer chatting in a group. However, if I need personal advice, I prefer talking to one friend.

提案: Câu trả lời nên tránh lặp từ 'uh' và sử dụng liên từ để câu trôi chảy hơn. Nên dùng từ vựng chính xác như 'social media' thay vì 'social platform'.

例: I think both are good. When we talk face-to-face, we can express emotions better. But for quick communication, I prefer social media because it is fast and convenient.

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'had' thay vì 'has' và dùng từ phù hợp. Nên dùng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và nói rõ ý hơn.

例: Yes, everyone argues sometimes. In friendships, we often argue about different topics, especially studies. For example, when we struggle with difficult exercises, disagreements can happen.

× I think jetting W friend is my habit and uh it can help us to enhance our relationship throughout many topics that we discussed together.

✓ I think chatting with friends is my habit and it can help us enhance our relationship through many topics that we discuss together.

The phrase 'jetting W friend' is incorrect; it should be 'chatting with friends'. Also, 'throughout many topics' should be 'through many topics'. The verb tense 'discussed' should be present tense 'discuss' to match the habitual action.

× Well, we discuss a lot of things that happens in the world and especially with our studying, we always discuss about the way to solve the exercise.

✓ Well, we discuss a lot of things that happen in the world and especially with our studies, we always discuss the way to solve the exercises.

The verb 'happens' should be plural 'happen' to agree with 'things'. 'Discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not need 'about'. 'Studying' should be 'studies' to refer to the subject area. 'Exercise' should be plural 'exercises' to match the context.

× And besides that, we can uh, always have some deep talk about our life too.

✓ And besides that, we can always have some deep talks about our lives too.

'Talk' should be plural 'talks' to match 'some'. 'Our life' should be plural 'our lives' because it refers to multiple individuals.

× I think it depends on my topic that I want to tell, uh, if I want to discuss about our studies or, uh, some thing that happened in, uh, our life, I would like to be part of the group, but when I need someone to give some advice for me, I would like.

✓ I think it depends on the topic that I want to talk about. If I want to discuss our studies or something that happened in our lives, I would like to be part of the group, but when I need someone to give me some advice, I would prefer to talk one-on-one.

'My topic that I want to tell' is better as 'the topic that I want to talk about'. 'Discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not need 'about'. 'Some thing' should be 'something'. 'Our life' should be 'our lives'. 'Give some advice for me' should be 'give me some advice'. The sentence was incomplete; added 'I would prefer to talk one-on-one' for clarity.

× I think both of them are great. Uh, when we communicate, uh, in person, we can express our emotion. But when I need something fast and uh, need to contact them immediately, I prefer to use via social platform because it's very fast and convenient for me.

✓ I think both of them are great. When we communicate in person, we can express our emotions. But when I need something fast and need to contact them immediately, I prefer to use social media platforms because it's very fast and convenient for me.

'Express our emotion' should be plural 'emotions'. 'Use via social platform' is incorrect; it should be 'use social media platforms'. 'Social platform' is better as 'social media platforms'.

× Yes, of course, who doesn't? I think each relationship had many different topic to argue and discuss.

✓ Yes, of course, who doesn't? I think each relationship has many different topics to argue and discuss.

'Had' should be present tense 'has' to match the current state. 'Topic' should be plural 'topics' to agree with 'many'.

× And I think especially for our teenager is uh, about the studies when we uh, solve the difficult exercise, but we like don't understand, we always have some arguments.

✓ And I think especially for us teenagers, it's about the studies when we solve difficult exercises, but we don't understand them, we always have some arguments.

'For our teenager' should be 'for us teenagers'. 'The difficult exercise' should be plural 'difficult exercises'. 'Like don't understand' is incorrect; should be 'don't understand them' for clarity.