Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid hesitation and redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends very much. Although I currently have only one close friend, we talk every day, which makes me feel connected. Besides that, I also like chatting with new people because it helps me learn different perspectives.

提案: Be more specific about the topics you discuss and use linking words to organize your answer. Avoid vague phrases like 'doesn't matter the information' and reduce hesitation.

例: I usually chat about everyday topics such as school, hobbies, and current events. For example, I often share interesting news or personal experiences, and my friends do the same, which keeps our conversations lively.

提案: Clarify your preference clearly and avoid confusing phrases. Use linking words to explain reasons logically and provide specific details about your feelings.

例: I prefer chatting with one or two close friends rather than a large group. This is because I feel more comfortable and less anxious in smaller settings, which allows me to express myself better.

提案: Make your preference clear and complete your sentences. Use linking words to compare both methods and provide specific reasons for your choice.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal and convenient. However, I also use social media to stay in touch when meeting in person is not possible.

提案: Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Clearly state your answer and explain your reasons with specific details and linking words.

例: I rarely argue with my friends because I am a calm person who values balance and respects others' opinions. When disagreements arise, I try to discuss them calmly to maintain good relationships.

× I like chatting with friends, but the bad thing is I don't have friends.

✓ I like chatting with friends, but the bad thing is I don't have any friends.

The sentence lacks a quantifier before 'friends' to indicate the absence of friends. Adding 'any' clarifies that the speaker has no friends at all.

× when I had a friend, only one friend in my life, uh, we chat with each other every day.

✓ when I had a friend, only one friend in my life, uh, we chatted with each other every day.

The verb 'chat' should be in the past tense 'chatted' to agree with the past time frame indicated by 'when I had a friend'.

× I usually, uh, chat about everyday things with my friends. Doesn't matter the information, I always share information what I want to share with them and they also, uh, behave like this.

✓ I usually, uh, chat about everyday things with my friends. It doesn't matter what information I share; I always share the information I want to share with them, and they also behave like this.

The phrase 'Doesn't matter the information' is incomplete and lacks a subject. Adding 'It' and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer to chat about all I want friends or two friends.

✓ I prefer to chat with one or two friends.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Chat with one or two friends' correctly expresses the intended meaning with proper singular/plural usage.

× I don't feel comfortable to be with a group within a group because they have social anxiety and I don't feel comfortable with uh them.

✓ I don't feel comfortable being in a group because I have social anxiety, and I don't feel comfortable with them.

The phrase 'to be with a group within a group' is awkward and redundant. Using 'being in a group' is more natural. Also, the sentence clarifies that the speaker has social anxiety, not the group.

× I prefer to communicate with face to face before because it's convenient to me and also it's good experience for me.

✓ I preferred to communicate face-to-face before because it was convenient for me and also a good experience for me.

The phrase 'communicate with face to face' is incorrect. 'Communicate face-to-face' is the correct expression. Also, past tense 'preferred' and 'was' align with 'before'.

× I also like to communicate with social media but if I would.

✓ I also like to communicate via social media, but only if I can.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'via social media' and completing the conditional clause improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I don't argue with friends because umm I'm not aggressive person, I like a balance and I respect other people's. Umm re what?

✓ I don't argue with friends because I'm not an aggressive person. I like balance and I respect other people.

The phrase 'other people's' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be 'other people' to refer to other individuals. Also, 'an aggressive person' requires the article 'an' before the noun.