Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng không phù hợp (ví dụ: 'sorrowful' không đúng ngữ cảnh). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tránh dùng từ không phù hợp. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, tự nhiên và tránh những từ gây hiểu nhầm.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share my experiences during my free time.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và dùng từ vựng chính xác. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'their novel we like'.

例: We usually talk about our hobbies, such as novels we enjoy, movies we watched last week, or personal experiences at school, especially when I feel sad.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và thêm một chút chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm phong phú nội dung.

例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I have known her for 10 years, and I trust her completely. She always listens carefully and supports me whenever I need help.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh những từ không cần thiết như 'uh'.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows my friend and me to spend time together, such as going to coffee shops or studying and chatting in person.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt rõ ràng cảm xúc cũng như tình huống.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, but it doesn't happen often because we get along well. When I am angry, I feel guilty afterward because I don't want to hurt their feelings.

× I am a so sorrowful and friendly person so I have more stories to talk with my friends when I'm in free time.

✓ I am a very sorrowful and friendly person, so I have more stories to talk about with my friends when I have free time.

The word 'so' is incorrectly used before the adjective 'sorrowful'; 'very' is the correct intensifier here. Also, 'talk with' should be 'talk about' when referring to topics of conversation. 'I'm in free time' is incorrect; it should be 'I have free time' to express availability.

× I am a so sorrowful and friendly person so I have more stories to talk with my friends when I'm in free time.

✓ I am a very sorrowful and friendly person, so I have more stories to talk about with my friends when I have free time.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect after 'talk'; the correct preposition is 'about' when referring to the subject of conversation.

× We usually chat about our hobbies like their novel we like, a film that we watch last week or some stories or experience in my school especially when I have some sad story.

✓ We usually chat about our hobbies like the novels we like, a film that we watched last week, or some stories or experiences in my school, especially when I have some sad stories.

The preposition 'like' is used correctly, but 'their novel' is incorrect; it should be 'the novels we like'. Also, 'watch' should be in past tense 'watched' to match 'last week'. 'Experience' should be plural 'experiences' to match 'some'.

× We usually chat about our hobbies like their novel we like, a film that we watch last week or some stories or experience in my school especially when I have some sad story.

✓ We usually chat about our hobbies like the novels we like, a film that we watched last week, or some stories or experiences in my school, especially when I have some sad stories.

The verb 'watch' should be in past tense 'watched' because it refers to an action completed in the past ('last week').

× We usually chat about our hobbies like their novel we like, a film that we watch last week or some stories or experience in my school especially when I have some sad story.

✓ We usually chat about our hobbies like the novels we like, a film that we watched last week, or some stories or experiences in my school, especially when I have some sad stories.

The noun 'novel' should be plural 'novels' to agree with 'hobbies' and 'some stories or experiences' should be plural to match the context.

× I prefer chatting with just one friend.

✓ I prefer chatting with just one friend.

No correction needed; the preposition 'with' is correctly used here.

× I have a friend I have known for 10 years so I trust her and I like sharing all my stories with her.

✓ I have a friend whom I have known for 10 years, so I trust her and like sharing all my stories with her.

The relative pronoun 'whom' is more appropriate as the object of 'have known'. Also, 'I like' can be simplified to 'like' after 'so'.

× I like to communicate face to face because uh, when communicates face to face, I, me and my friend have time to went out together.

✓ I like to communicate face to face because, when communicating face to face, my friend and I have time to go out together.

'Communicates' should be 'communicating' (gerund) after 'when'. 'Me and my friend' should be 'my friend and I' as the subject. 'Went' should be 'go' to match the present tense.

× It's at a coffee shops or we learn together and chatting together.

✓ We go to coffee shops, or we learn and chat together.

'It's at a coffee shops' is incorrect; it should be 'We go to coffee shops'. Also, 'chatting' should be 'chat' to parallel 'learn'.

× Me and my friends are very, uh, are very suitable.

✓ My friends and I get along very well.

'Me and my friends' is incorrect as a subject; it should be 'My friends and I'. 'Are very suitable' is awkward; 'get along very well' is more natural.

× So we don't have some argument when but when I'm angry I I have, I have a guilt to her, so I have to hurt her.

✓ So we don't have arguments, but when I'm angry, I feel guilty towards her, so I try not to hurt her.

The conjunctions are misused and the sentence is fragmented. 'Some argument' should be plural 'arguments'. 'I have a guilt to her' is incorrect; it should be 'I feel guilty towards her'. 'I have to hurt her' is likely a mistake; 'I try not to hurt her' makes more sense.