Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ "effective way". Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I really enjoy talking with my friends. We usually share stories about our day, which is an effective way to strengthen our friendship.

提案: Bạn dùng từ "personal experiments" không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này, nên dùng từ "experiences". Ngoài ra, tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính xác và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Well, we usually talk about our personal experiences during the day or week, and sometimes we discuss our hobbies, such as favorite movies, singers, or TV shows.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi lặp từ và ngữ pháp, ví dụ như "more more dynamic" và "various perspective from a reason". Bạn nên luyện tập phát âm và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn, đồng thời sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because group chats are usually more dynamic, and I enjoy hearing various perspectives. It's also a good way to share ideas and brainstorm.

提案: Bạn đã nói "faith to faith" thay vì "face to face" và câu cuối thiếu từ để hoàn chỉnh. Hãy chú ý phát âm và cấu trúc câu để tránh nhầm lẫn và làm câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn.

例: Personally, I prefer communicating face to face because I can read their emotions, and I think it's a great way to engage in conversation.

提案: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ "argue" và "argument" liên tiếp, đồng thời sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn. Ngoài ra, "more better" là lỗi ngữ pháp, nên dùng "better" thôi.

例: Yes, we argue sometimes, but we resolve our disagreements quickly. I think arguing is a healthy way to connect and helps us communicate better.

× Yes, I really enjoyed talking with my buddies.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy talking with my buddies.

The question is in present tense 'Do you like', so the answer should also be in present tense to match the time frame. Using 'enjoyed' (past tense) is inconsistent here.

× We usually shared about our stories during the day and it's like an effective way, effective way to strengthen our friendship.

✓ We usually share our stories during the day and it's an effective way to strengthen our friendship.

The verb 'share' does not require the preposition 'about' after it. Also, 'it's like an effective way' is awkward; 'it's an effective way' is correct.

× Well, we usually talk about our personal experiments during the day or the week, and sometimes we talk about our hobbies like favorite movies, favorite singers, or, uh, TV shows.

✓ Well, we usually talk about our personal experiences during the day or the week, and sometimes we talk about our hobbies like favorite movies, favorite singers, or TV shows.

The word 'experiments' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'experiences'. 'Experiments' refers to scientific tests, while 'experiences' refers to personal events or activities.

× I prefer the I prefer chatting with a group of people because group chats are always more dynamic and more more dynamic and I like to hear various perspective from a reason and it's a good way to share. I share ideas and brainstorm.

✓ I prefer chatting with a group of people because group chats are always more dynamic and I like to hear various perspectives from different people and it's a good way to share ideas and brainstorm.

Repeated phrase 'more more dynamic' is an error. 'Perspective' should be plural 'perspectives' to match 'various'. 'From a reason' is incorrect; it should be 'from different people' or similar. Also, 'I share ideas and brainstorm' should be combined properly.

× Personally, I like communicating faith to faith because I can read their emotions and I think it's a great way to engagement.

✓ Personally, I like communicating face to face because I can read their emotions and I think it's a great way to engage.

The phrase 'faith to faith' is a mishearing or misspelling of 'face to face'. Also, 'a great way to engagement' is incorrect; it should be 'a great way to engage'.

× Yes, we argue a lot, but we will solve it quickly.

✓ Yes, we argue a lot, but we solve it quickly.

The use of 'will' here is unnecessary because the context is habitual or general, so present tense 'solve' is more appropriate.

× I think uh arguing argument is a healthy way to connect us and help them to communicate more better.

✓ I think arguing is a healthy way to connect us and help us communicate better.

The phrase 'arguing argument' is redundant; only 'arguing' is needed. 'Help them to communicate more better' is incorrect; it should be 'help us communicate better' because 'more better' is incorrect (better is already comparative) and pronoun 'them' does not match the subject 'us'.