Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammatical accuracy by using correct verb forms and sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy and make the answer more concise and natural.

例: Yes, I chat with my friends every day, usually online, and we talk about our lives, work, and food.

提案: Focus on clarity and grammatical correctness. Avoid repetition and provide a clear reason with linking words to make the answer coherent.

例: Actually, we usually chat about work because it takes up most of our time, and we often discuss our boss.

提案: Use more precise vocabulary and correct singular/plural forms. Also, improve fluency by avoiding filler words and making the answer more natural.

例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I have slight social anxiety, and I can focus better and share more about our lives.

提案: Reduce filler words and improve sentence structure. Use appropriate vocabulary to describe non-verbal communication clearly and concisely.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can observe facial expressions and body language, which helps me understand their emotions better.

提案: Clarify the meaning and use more natural expressions. Avoid vague phrases and explain the positive effect of arguments more clearly.

例: Yes, we sometimes argue when we have different opinions or tasks, but I believe it doesn't harm our relationship and can actually help us understand each other better.

× Yes, I always chatting with my friends every day and we often chat online and talk about our life, our work and our food.

✓ Yes, I am always chatting with my friends every day and we often chat online and talk about our life, our work and our food.

The verb 'chatting' needs an auxiliary verb to form the present continuous tense. Adding 'am' before 'always chatting' corrects the sentence structure.

× MMM Actually we always chat about work because our work have our work have most time in our life and we always talk about our boss. Yes.

✓ MMM Actually we always chat about work because our work takes most of our time in our life and we always talk about our boss. Yes.

The subject 'work' is singular, so the verb should be 'takes' instead of 'have'. Also, 'have our work have' is repetitive and incorrect; it should be simplified to 'takes most of our time'.

× Umm, I prefer to chat with only one friend because I have a little social phobia and I think I can pay more attention to 1 people and we will share more about our life.

✓ Umm, I prefer to chat with only one friend because I have a little social phobia and I think I can pay more attention to one person and we will share more about our life.

The word 'people' is plural, but 'one' indicates singular, so 'person' should be used instead of 'people'.

× MMM actually I think both but uh umm I prefer the communicate face to face because I can stay there face and watch the watch the ear eyes ears and their face. I can feel their emotion.

✓ MMM actually I think both but uh umm I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see their face and watch their eyes and ears. I can feel their emotion.

The phrase 'prefer the communicate' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to communicate'. Also, 'stay there face' is unclear and incorrect; 'see their face' is appropriate. Repetition and incorrect word order were corrected for clarity.

× Yes, when we have different tasks and different thinking, we will argue, but I don't think this action will affect our emotion and absolutely will improve our emotion.

✓ Yes, when we have different tasks and different thoughts, we argue, but I don't think this action affects our emotions and it definitely improves our emotions.

The phrase 'different thinking' is better expressed as 'different thoughts'. Also, 'will argue' is changed to 'argue' to match the present tense context. 'Affect our emotion' and 'improve our emotion' should be plural 'emotions' for correctness and naturalness.