Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid repetition and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Also, use singular/plural forms correctly and improve sentence structure for clarity.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relieve stress from my daily academic life. Moreover, it strengthens our bond. Sometimes, we also discuss plans to go out and have fun together.

提案: Avoid vague phrases and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically. Be specific about topics and avoid redundancy.

例: We usually chat about our daily lives, such as academic work or interesting things we see around us. Additionally, we often plan outings and discuss the details to have fun together.

提案: Improve grammar and sentence structure. Use clearer expressions and linking words to explain your preference. Avoid awkward phrasing and be concise.

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I find it easier to express my feelings. In a group, I feel less comfortable sharing personal thoughts, so one-on-one conversations allow me to focus and speak more freely.

提案: Good answer but try to avoid repetition and improve word choice. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more concise.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication with my friends because social media messages, including texts and emojis, can sometimes cause misunderstandings. Therefore, in-person conversations are clearer and more effective.

提案: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and improve sentence structure for coherence.

例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions on certain topics. However, these arguments usually help us understand each other better.

× I think it helped me relieve my burden from my daily academic lives

✓ I think it helps me relieve my burden from my daily academic life

The sentence is describing a current habit or general truth, so the present tense 'helps' is appropriate instead of the past tense 'helped'. Also, 'academic lives' should be singular 'academic life' because it refers to the student's own life.

× I think it's also a useful ways to bond our connection

✓ I think it's also a useful way to bond our connection

'Ways' is plural but 'a' indicates singular, so 'ways' should be changed to singular 'way' to match the article 'a'.

× And sometimes we can talk about when we can go out, hang out to have some fun

✓ And sometimes we can talk about when we can go out and hang out to have some fun

The phrase 'go out, hang out' needs a conjunction 'and' to connect the two activities properly.

× Well, I think we often talk about our daily life, things like academic or something we see on the roads, which is interesting

✓ Well, I think we often talk about our daily lives, things like academics or something we see on the road, which is interesting

'Daily life' should be plural 'daily lives' because it refers to multiple people's lives. 'Academic' should be plural 'academics' to refer to academic subjects or matters. 'Roads' should be singular 'road' to refer generally to what is seen on the road.

× sometimes we talk about when we show hang out together to have some fun and so we talk about those details together

✓ sometimes we talk about when we should hang out together to have some fun and so we talk about those details together

The word 'show' is incorrect here; it should be 'should' to express suggestion or intention.

× I perceive myself more enjoy talking to with only one friend

✓ I perceive myself as enjoying talking with only one friend more

The phrase 'perceive myself more enjoy' is incorrect. It should be 'perceive myself as enjoying'. Also, 'talking to with' is redundant; 'talking with' is correct.

× because when I'm a group of people talking together

✓ because when I'm in a group of people talking together

The phrase 'I'm a group of people' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm in a group of people' to indicate being part of the group.

× I'm not that kind of person who can easily talk about myself's feeling with so many people

✓ I'm not that kind of person who can easily talk about my feelings with so many people

'Myself's feeling' is incorrect; the correct possessive pronoun is 'my' and 'feelings' should be plural.

× I think when I'm talking to 1 friend I can concentrate on the subject and talk more freely

✓ I think when I'm talking to one friend I can concentrate on the subject and talk more freely

The number '1' should be written as the word 'one' in formal speech or writing.

× I prefer to communicate face to face with my friends because via social medias we can only see those text, those literal text and those emojis

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face with my friends because via social media we can only see those texts, those literal texts and those emojis

'Social medias' is incorrect; the correct term is 'social media' (uncountable). Also, 'text' should be plural 'texts' to match 'those'.

× Sometimes we misunderstand each other's feelings or what they actually mean, so it may lead to misunderstandings

✓ Sometimes we misunderstand each other's feelings or what they actually mean, so this may lead to misunderstandings

The pronoun 'it' is vague here; 'this' better refers to the previous idea of misunderstanding.

× Well, I think sometimes it is true

✓ Well, I think sometimes it happens

The phrase 'sometimes it is true' is awkward and unclear. 'Sometimes it happens' is clearer and more natural in this context.

× I argue with my friends because when we talk about something when and we share our opinions, sometimes we have arguments on this

✓ I argue with my friends because when we talk about something and share our opinions, sometimes we have arguments about it

The phrase 'when we talk about something when and we share' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'arguments on this' should be 'arguments about it'.

× We are uh, divided by this thing

✓ We are, uh, divided by this issue

'This thing' is vague; 'this issue' is more appropriate in the context of arguments.

× We have different opinions so that we started to argue

✓ We have different opinions, so we start to argue

The phrase 'so that we started to argue' is incorrect. 'So we start to argue' is the correct conjunction use and tense for the context.