Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid unclear or incorrect words like 'gay' in this context and reduce hesitation sounds such as 'umm' and 'uh'. Make your answer more natural and coherent by clearly stating why you like chatting with friends and providing a specific reason or example. Keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me gain new perspectives and learn about different experiences. For example, we often share ideas about our studies and hobbies.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and by providing more specific details. Also, try to avoid hesitation sounds and keep your sentences concise and natural.

例: I usually chat with my friends about our current situations, such as what we are doing at school and the subjects we are learning. This helps us stay updated and support each other.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a direct response first, then explain your preference with clear reasons. Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences to make your answer more effective and natural.

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I feel more comfortable and can have deeper conversations. In groups, I tend to be quieter and less involved.

提案: Your answer is somewhat confusing. Clarify your preference clearly and explain why. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid hesitation sounds. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'more easier' to 'easier'.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face with my friends because it's easier to express my feelings accurately. Sometimes, social media can be less clear and cause misunderstandings.

提案: Your answer is contradictory and incomplete. Make sure to answer directly and clearly. If you dislike arguments, say so and explain why. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences to improve clarity and coherence.

例: I don't like to argue with my friends because it can harm our relationship. I prefer to resolve disagreements calmly to maintain good friendships.

× Yes, I like chatting with friends because it's gay.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends because it's fun.

The word 'gay' is incorrectly used here as an adjective to describe chatting. The intended meaning is likely 'fun' or 'enjoyable'. Using 'fun' correctly conveys the positive feeling about chatting.

× It gives me. Umm, a lot of knowledge and perspective, uh, talking with HP?

✓ It gives me a lot of knowledge and perspective when talking with friends.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining the fragments into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I usually talk with my friend about our current situation, uh, for example.

✓ I usually talk with my friends about our current situation, for example.

The plural 'friends' is more appropriate when referring to multiple people one chats with. Using 'friend' singular is less natural in this context.

× I would say, uh, I prefer chatting. I prefer chatting with one, only one friend, umm, in a group I tend to be in in quiet, but uh, with.

✓ I would say I prefer chatting with only one friend because in a group I tend to be quiet.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains repetition and unclear phrasing. Reorganising it into a clear, complete sentence improves understanding.

× I prefer to communicate in. Dialect with my friend because I found it more easier to express my feelings correctly, uh, in, uh, social media, uh, sometimes.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face with my friend because I find it easier to express my feelings correctly than on social media sometimes.

The phrase 'communicate in dialect' is unclear and likely incorrect here. 'Face-to-face' is the correct expression for direct communication. Also, 'more easier' is incorrect; 'easier' suffices. Prepositions 'on social media' is correct instead of 'in social media'.

× I really argue with my friends because, uh, originally I hate argument, I I hate doing arguments and it's prevent me from keeping good relationship with my.

✓ I don't really argue with my friends because I hate arguments, and they prevent me from keeping good relationships with them.

The original sentence has modal verb and verb form errors. 'I really argue' contradicts the intended meaning; 'I don't really argue' is correct. 'It's prevent' should be 'they prevent' to agree with plural 'arguments'. Also, 'relationship with my' is incomplete; 'relationships with them' is correct.