Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为冗长且表达不够自然，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更地道的表达方式。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it allows me to share my thoughts and experiences, which helps strengthen our relationships.

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，建议避免重复表达，使用更准确的词汇，并且句子结构应更流畅。

例: I usually chat with my friends about our hobbies and interests, such as singing together or watching TV shows, which helps us relax.

提案: 表达不够清晰且有语法错误，建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because it feels more comfortable and allows for deeper, more meaningful conversations.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够自然，建议注意时态和句子结构，使用更地道的表达方式。

例: It depends on the situation. If I'm busy or my friends live far away, I use social media. Otherwise, I prefer face-to-face communication.

提案: 回答中表达不够流畅且有语法错误，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免句子碎片。

例: I usually avoid arguing with friends because I value harmony in our relationships, and we generally agree on most things.

× Yes, I really enjoy talking with friends because there's a chance for me to express my opinion or things happen to me and I'm finding it's a good way to maintain our relationship by talking with our friends.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy talking with friends because there's a chance for me to express my opinion or things that happen to me and I find it's a good way to maintain our relationship by talking with our friends.

原句中“I'm finding”使用了现在进行时，表达习惯或事实时应使用一般现在时“I find”。此外，“things happen to me”缺少关系代词“that”，应为“things that happen to me”。建议使用一般现在时表达常态或事实。

× Most of the time I usually talk with my friends about talking about hobbies and interests.

✓ Most of the time I usually talk with my friends about hobbies and interests.

原句中“talk with my friends about talking about hobbies”存在重复使用“talk about”，造成表达冗余，应去掉其中一个“talking about”。

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I will feel more comfortable to chat with him or her and it can relax myself to talk with them.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I feel more comfortable chatting with him or her and it can relax me to talk with them.

“relax myself”用法错误，应该用“relax me”，因为“myself”是反身代词，表示动作回到主语自身，而这里是被动感受。

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I will feel more comfortable to chat with him or her and it can relax myself to talk with them.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I feel more comfortable chatting with him or her and it can relax me to talk with him or her.

句中“them”指代单数“one friend”，应使用单数代词“him or her”以保持一致。

× And I wonder meaning more meaningful deeply conversation.

✓ And I want a more meaningful and deep conversation.

原句“wonder meaning more meaningful deeply conversation”结构混乱，语法错误。应使用“want a more meaningful and deep conversation”表达想要更有意义和深入的对话。

× When I'm busy or talk with friends or family who will live far away, I will choose talk with them via social media.

✓ When I'm busy or talking with friends or family who live far away, I will choose to talk with them via social media.

“When I'm busy or talk with friends”中“talk”应改为动名词“talking”以保持并列结构一致；“choose talk”应为“choose to talk”。

× But for the person who I chat with them most, I will choose face to face.

✓ But for the person I chat with most, I will choose face to face communication.

“who I chat with them most”中“who”和“them”重复指代，应去掉“them”；“face to face”后应加名词“communication”使表达完整。

× Now usually I do not argue with friends because I want to make the harmony in our relationship and besides, my friends and I agree on most things so there's no need to argue with them.

✓ Usually, I do not argue with friends because I want to maintain harmony in our relationship. Besides, my friends and I agree on most things, so there's no need to argue with them.

“make the harmony”用法不当，应为“maintain harmony”；句子过长，建议分句使表达更清晰。

× I prefer chatting with friends. Avoid arguing.

✓ I prefer chatting with friends and avoiding arguments.

“Avoid arguing”是一个不完整的句子，应与前句合并或改为完整句子。