Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cavabınızda cümlə quruluşunu və qrammatikanı təkmilləşdirmək lazımdır. Daha aydın və qısa ifadələr istifadə edin, məsələn, 'I enjoy chatting with my friends because I can share my thoughts, and they like it too. However, sometimes chatting can have problems.'

例: I enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows me to share my thoughts, and they appreciate it. However, sometimes chatting can lead to misunderstandings.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə məntiqi ardıcıllığı artırmaq və əlavə məlumatları əlaqələndirmək üçün keçid sözlərindən istifadə edin. Məsələn, 'We often discuss our future plans and feelings about other friends; sometimes we gossip. Also, we talk about our goals for the next week or year.'

例: We often discuss our future plans and share our feelings about other friends. Sometimes, we gossip a little. Additionally, we talk about our goals for the upcoming week or year.

提案: Cümlələrinizi daha aydın və qısa edin, həmçinin keçid sözləri əlavə edin. Məsələn, 'I prefer chatting with only one friend because group chats can be confusing and cause misunderstandings. Therefore, one-on-one chats are better for me.'

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because group chats can be confusing and sometimes lead to misunderstandings. Therefore, I find one-on-one conversations more suitable.

提案: Cümlələrinizi tamamlayın və daha aydın ifadələrdən istifadə edin. Keçid sözləri əlavə edin və qrammatikanı düzəldin. Məsələn, 'It depends. During vacations, I prefer face-to-face communication because I can understand emotions better and avoid misunderstandings. However, when I am busy, I use social media.'

例: It depends on the situation. During vacations, I prefer face-to-face communication because I can better understand my friends' emotions and avoid misunderstandings. However, when I am busy with work, I communicate via social media.

提案: Cümlələrinizi daha qısa və aydın edin, həmçinin keçid sözləri əlavə edin. Məsələn, 'No, I don't argue with my friends because we are all friendly and respectful. They are special to me, so I avoid misunderstandings.'

例: No, I don't argue with my friends because we are all friendly and respectful towards each other. They are special to me, so I try to avoid any misunderstandings.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friends and I like to share my thoughts to my friends while why chat and they also loved it.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends and I like to share my thoughts with my friends while chatting and they also love it.

The phrase 'while why chat' is incorrect; it should be 'while chatting' to use the correct verb + -ing form. Also, 'loved' should be 'love' to match the present tense context. Additionally, 'share my thoughts to my friends' should be 'share my thoughts with my friends' because 'share' is followed by 'with' not 'to'.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friends and I like to share my thoughts to my friends while why chat and they also loved it.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends and I like to share my thoughts with my friends while chatting and they also love it.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used after 'share'; the correct preposition is 'with' when indicating the person with whom thoughts are shared.

× But there is some problems with chatting.

✓ But there are some problems with chatting.

The subject 'problems' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× Well, we often discuss our thoughts about future and our feelings about other friends, like gossiping.

✓ Well, we often discuss our thoughts about the future and our feelings about other friends, like gossiping.

The noun 'future' needs the definite article 'the' to specify the time period being discussed.

× But there is.

✓ But there is a problem.

The sentence 'But there is.' is incomplete and lacks a noun complement after 'is' to complete the thought.

× And we often discuss our future goals and what we need to do next year or next week or week.

✓ And we often discuss our future goals and what we need to do next year, next week, or this week.

The phrase 'or week' is incomplete and unclear; it should specify 'this week' or another time frame for clarity and correctness.

× I personally prefer at Chadwick is only one friend because while a group of people wrote a message, I don't exactly read all of them and sometimes I have misunderstandings and it's not suitable for me.

✓ I personally prefer to chat with only one friend because when a group of people write messages, I don't read all of them exactly and sometimes I have misunderstandings, so it's not suitable for me.

The phrase 'prefer at Chadwick is only one friend' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to chat with only one friend'. Also, 'while a group of people wrote a message' should be 'when a group of people write messages' to match tense and meaning. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× But with only one friend I chat.

✓ But I chat with only one friend.

The sentence order is awkward; placing the subject 'I' before the verb 'chat' and adding 'with' improves clarity and correctness.

× When I have vacation, I prefer to communicate with my friends face to face because, uh, I with face to face communication, I can feel, uh, their feelings, uh, emotional and I will never had misunderstanding the next.

✓ When I have a vacation, I prefer to communicate with my friends face to face because with face-to-face communication, I can feel their emotions and I will never have misunderstandings afterwards.

The phrase 'I with face to face communication' is incorrect; it should be 'with face-to-face communication'. Also, 'will never had' should be 'will never have' to use the correct future tense. 'Feel their feelings, uh, emotional' is better expressed as 'feel their emotions'. 'The next' is unclear and replaced with 'afterwards'.

× But when I have a word and.

✓ But when I have work, I prefer other ways to communicate.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear; 'word' is likely a mispronunciation of 'work'. The sentence is completed for clarity.

× No, I don't agree argue with my friends because all my friends are very friendly and they never do wrong for me and I also never do the wrong thing to them.

✓ No, I don't argue with my friends because all my friends are very friendly and they never do anything wrong to me, and I also never do anything wrong to them.

The phrase 'don't agree argue' is incorrect; it should be 'don't argue'. Also, 'do wrong for me' should be 'do anything wrong to me' for correct collocation. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× They are special for me and I don't want to have misunderstandings each other.

✓ They are special to me and I don't want us to have misunderstandings with each other.

The phrase 'misunderstandings each other' is incorrect; it should be 'misunderstandings with each other'. Also, 'special for me' is better expressed as 'special to me'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity.