Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，表达不够自然。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me feel happier and more relaxed.

提案: 回答内容不清晰，词汇使用错误，句子结构混乱。建议使用准确的词汇表达具体话题，并注意句子完整性。

例: We usually chat about our common interests, such as travel experiences and food, especially when we have lunch together.

提案: 表达不流畅，语法错误较多。建议简洁明了地表达个人偏好，并使用正确的语法结构。

例: I prefer talking with only one friend because I am a quiet person, and one-on-one conversations are more interesting to me than group chats.

提案: 回答中有语法和拼写错误，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的词汇和句型，清晰表达观点。

例: I mostly prefer face-to-face communication with my friends or classmates because it feels more relaxing and interesting. I don't enjoy communicating via social media.

提案: 回答语法错误多，表达不清晰。建议简洁表达观点，避免重复，并使用正确的语法。

例: I usually don't argue with my friends because I am a quiet person, and we get along well without conflicts.

× Yes I worry like checking with my friends because I think when I was talking with my friends it is make me feel happier so it is make me relaxed.

✓ Yes, I really like chatting with my friends because I think when I talk with my friends, it makes me feel happier and relaxed.

这里“checking”用错了，应该用动名词“chatting”表示“聊天”。另外，“it is make me”结构错误，应该用第三人称单数动词形式“makes”。建议用“chatting”替代“checking”，并注意主谓一致。

× Yes I worry like checking with my friends because I think when I was talking with my friends it is make me feel happier so it is make me relaxed.

✓ Yes, I really like chatting with my friends because I think when I talk with my friends, it makes me feel happier and relaxed.

句中“when I was talking”时态不合适，描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时“when I talk”。建议将过去进行时改为一般现在时。

× Sometimes I checked with my friends a long time because we have a common habitat and and it is relax.

✓ Sometimes I chat with my friends for a long time because we have a common habit and it is relaxing.

“checked”用错，应为“chat”表示“聊天”；“habitat”应为“habit”；“it is relax”应为“it is relaxing”，形容词用错，需用现在分词作表语。建议改正动词形式和词汇拼写。

× For example, when we travel and eating lunch we check with.

✓ For example, when we travel and eat lunch, we chat together.

“eating”应改为动词原形“eat”与“travel”保持一致；“check with”用法错误，应为“chat”。建议改正动词形式和搭配。

× I prefer to talk with a only one friend because I am a quiet people.

✓ I prefer to talk with only one friend because I am a quiet person.

“people”是复数，表示“人们”，此处应使用单数“person”表示“一个人”。建议注意单复数的正确使用。

× So one only one people it can make me uh, make me interesting and I don't like chat with a group of people.

✓ So only one person can make me interested, and I don't like chatting with a group of people.

“one only one people”结构混乱，应为“only one person”；“make me interesting”错误，正确表达是“make me interested”；“chat”应改为动名词“chatting”。建议理清数量词顺序，注意形容词和动词形式。

× Mostly I prefer to communicate face to face with my friends or with my classes because I think face to face can make me communicate, relax and interesting.

✓ Mostly, I prefer to communicate face to face with my friends or classmates because I think face to face communication makes me relaxed and interested.

“with my classes”应为“with my classmates”；“make me communicate, relax and interesting”结构错误，应为“makes me relaxed and interested”。建议改正介词搭配和形容词使用。

× I don't like visa social media and I think it is not interesting.

✓ I don't like via social media and I think it is not interesting.

“visa”拼写错误，应为“via”，表示“通过”。建议注意拼写。

× Mostly I don't argue with my friends because I was a a quiet people and I don't argue with someone and my friends don't argue with me so we we hi hidden argue with each other.

✓ Mostly, I don't argue with my friends because I am a quiet person and I don't argue with anyone, and my friends don't argue with me, so we rarely argue with each other.

“I was a a quiet people”时态和单复数错误，应为“I am a quiet person”；“someone”应为“anyone”；“hi hidden”无意义，应改为“rarely”。建议注意时态、单复数和词汇选择。