Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但存在语法错误和表达不够简洁的问题。建议注意动词时态和单复数一致，避免冗余表达。

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because they are very supportive and understanding. Whenever I face difficulties, they always support me without hesitation, which makes me feel relaxed when talking to them.

提案: 回答内容不够具体，表达有语法和用词错误。建议提供更具体的聊天话题，并注意词汇搭配和句子结构。

例: We usually chat about daily life, such as what we are eating or our plans for the day. I believe that chatting is not only about the topics but also about enjoying each other's company and building a connection.

提案: 回答表达了个人偏好，但语法和表达不够准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，注意主谓一致和句子流畅。

例: I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group because I am introverted. One-on-one conversations make me feel more relaxed and comfortable.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议改进句子结构，使用更准确的词汇表达感受。

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows for more personal interaction and I can better understand each other's feelings. Although social media connects people across distances, it sometimes feels impersonal to me.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不流畅。建议完整表达观点，使用连贯的句子，并避免句子中断。

例: Sometimes we argue, but not very often and usually about small things. I often forget the reasons for these arguments. However, we quickly make up because we understand each other well.

× Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friend because they are supportive and emotional.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because they are supportive and emotional.

这里的主语是复数的“they”，所以对应的名词也应该是复数形式“friends”，表示多个朋友。

× When I have difficulties they will support me without hesitate so it just makes me feel relaxed to talk with them.

✓ When I have difficulties, they will support me without hesitation, so it just makes me feel relaxed to talk with them.

“without hesitate”中“hesitate”应为名词形式“hesitation”，表示“没有犹豫”。

× I have noticed some small things like what I'm eating today and what I'm doing today.

✓ I have noticed some small things like what I ate today and what I did today.

这里描述的是过去发生的事情，应该用过去时态。

× I think talking is not just about the context but more about the connection and enjoy each other's accompany.

✓ I think talking is not just about the content but more about the connection and enjoying each other's company.

“context”应为“content”，表示内容；“enjoy”应改为动名词“enjoying”以保持句子结构一致；“accompany”应为名词“company”，表示陪伴。

× Well not really because I'm introverted and talk with a group of people makes me feel nervous.

✓ Well, not really, because I'm introverted and talking with a group of people makes me feel nervous.

主语是动名词短语“talking with a group of people”，需要用动名词形式。

× I prefer communicate face to face because it's more touchable and you can feel each other's feelings, uh, deeply.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it's more tangible and you can feel each other's feelings deeply.

“prefer”后应接不定式“to communicate”；“touchable”用词不当，应为“tangible”，表示“可触摸的”；“face to face”前后应加连字符“face-to-face”。

× Although social media broke the geography distance, but it also gives me a sense of strange.

✓ Although social media broke the geographical distance, it also gives me a sense of strangeness.

“Although”与“but”不能同时使用；“geography distance”应为“geographical distance”；“a sense of strange”应为“a sense of strangeness”。

× Sometimes, not very often, but it just about small things.

✓ Sometimes, not very often, but it's just about small things.

句子缺少谓语动词“is”，导致句子结构不完整。

× However, we will get real in very little time because we all understand each other and.

✓ However, we will get real in a very short time because we all understand each other.

句子末尾“and”后无内容，造成句子不完整，应去掉“and”；“in very little time”更常用表达为“in a very short time”。