Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Perbaiki penggunaan tata bahasa dan hindari pengulangan kata seperti 'umm' dan 'uh'. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan langsung ke inti jawaban tanpa redundansi. Misalnya, gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas untuk menyatakan preferensi Anda.

例: I like chatting with friends occasionally, but I don't enjoy using chat apps for daily conversations because it can be boring and tiring to type all the time.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kata penghubung yang tepat untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren. Hindari penggunaan kata yang tidak jelas seperti 'some stuff' dan berikan detail yang lebih spesifik.

例: We usually chat about our daily activities and sometimes discuss interesting events or gossip about our classmates.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide dan hindari kesalahan seperti 'one friends'.

例: It depends on the situation. Sometimes I enjoy chatting with a group of eight friends, but other times I prefer talking one-on-one with my best friend.

提案: Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan tata bahasa. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih jelas dan alami. Jelaskan alasan preferensi Anda dengan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur.

例: I prefer both face-to-face and social media communication. Face-to-face can be tiring sometimes, but social media doesn't allow personal meetings, so it depends on my mood and situation.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa, terutama penggunaan tense dan kata kerja. Hindari pengulangan kata dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan alami untuk menjelaskan situasi.

例: Yes, sometimes we argue when we meet or chat online because we have different opinions, but we remain close friends.

× For sometimes I like chatting with friends but I don't like uh, use chatting for daily conversation because it's too bored and I feel tired of umm texting on a keyboard and sometimes it gets me umm, not for cues at all.

✓ Sometimes I like chatting with friends but I don't like to use chatting for daily conversation because it's too boring and I feel tired of texting on a keyboard and sometimes it doesn't give me any cues at all.

The phrase 'For sometimes' is incorrect; 'Sometimes' is the correct quantifier to indicate frequency. 'Too bored' should be 'too boring' because 'boring' describes the thing causing boredom. 'Not for cues at all' is unclear and corrected to 'doesn't give me any cues at all' for clarity.

× Well, we're usually chat about daily activities, sometimes we talk about what happened or like hotter topics about our friends, like gossiping about someone else in our classes or maybe out class and we share it about some stuff.

✓ Well, we usually chat about daily activities, sometimes we talk about what happened or like hotter topics about our friends, like gossiping about someone else in our classes or maybe outside class and we share some stuff.

The phrase 'we're usually chat' is incorrect; it should be 'we usually chat' to match present simple tense. 'Out class' is corrected to 'outside class' for proper preposition use. 'Share it about some stuff' is simplified to 'share some stuff' for clarity.

× Sometimes I like to chat with a group 'cause we have one group that contains 8 member of us.

✓ Sometimes I like to chat with a group 'cause we have one group that contains 8 members of us.

'Member' should be plural 'members' because it refers to multiple people in the group.

× But sometimes I'd like to chat with one friends like my best friends or maybe one of my friends from the group or another.

✓ But sometimes I'd like to chat with one friend like my best friend or maybe one of my friends from the group or another.

'One friends' is incorrect; 'one' requires singular noun 'friend'. Also, 'best friends' should be singular 'best friend' to match 'one friend'.

× Well I'd like to communicate in both use cause sometimes communicate face to face will drain my energy so much and when it just via social media we cannot meet in person.

✓ Well, I'd like to communicate using both because sometimes communicating face to face drains my energy so much and when it's just via social media we cannot meet in person.

'Communicate in both use' is incorrect; 'communicate using both' is correct. 'Cause' is informal; 'because' is better. 'Communicate face to face will drain' should be 'communicating face to face drains' for correct verb form and tense. 'When it just via social media' corrected to 'when it's just via social media' for correct verb and preposition.

× Yes, sometimes we arguing about something like when we meet each other or in social media or by texting.

✓ Yes, sometimes we argue about something like when we meet each other or on social media or by texting.

'We arguing' is incorrect; it should be 'we argue' to match present simple tense. 'In social media' corrected to 'on social media' for correct preposition.

× Cause uh, sometimes we just have different opinion about topics that we talk at that time and we arguing, but we're still closure.

✓ Because sometimes we just have different opinions about topics that we talk about at that time and we argue, but we're still close.

'Cause' is informal; 'Because' is better. 'Different opinion' should be plural 'different opinions'. 'We arguing' should be 'we argue' for present simple tense. 'Talk at that time' corrected to 'talk about at that time' for correct preposition. 'We're still closure' is incorrect; 'we're still close' is correct adjective.