Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is a bit long and somewhat unclear due to grammar and word choice issues. Try to give a clear, concise response with correct grammar and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a direct answer, then add a brief supporting detail using linking words.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. For instance, I often talk with my best friend Janard, who is a university teacher. We catch up whenever he has free time.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question, then provide specific examples with linking words to make your response coherent and natural.

例: I usually chat with my friends about various topics, depending on the time. For example, we often discuss research papers or study materials, and my friend encourages me to do my best.

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains some awkward phrasing and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repeating the same words.

例: I prefer chatting with a group of people rather than just one friend because it allows me to learn new things and share my thoughts with many people, which I find very enjoyable.

提案: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to give a direct answer first, then explain with clear reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words and repetition.

例: It depends on the situation. Sometimes I prefer face-to-face communication because it's more personal. However, when I am free, I like chatting with friends on social media because it's convenient.

提案: Your answer is somewhat confusing and repetitive. Try to clearly state your opinion, then explain with specific reasons using linking words to make your response coherent.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially when the topic is not relevant to me. However, I usually try to focus on the main points to keep the discussion constructive.

× I always chat with one of my best friend whose name is Janard Bishop

✓ I always chat with one of my best friends whose name is Janard Bishop

The phrase 'one of my best friend' is incorrect because 'one of' should be followed by a plural noun. The correct form is 'one of my best friends' to indicate one person from a group of friends.

× he's now a teacher of a pub private university

✓ he's now a teacher at a private university

The preposition 'of' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to indicate employment at an institution is 'at'. Also, 'pub private university' seems to be a mistake; 'private university' is appropriate.

× he always tried May always busy

✓ he is always busy

The phrase 'he always tried May always busy' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. It seems the intended meaning is that he is always busy. The correct form is 'he is always busy' using the present tense verb 'is'.

× whenever he is uh, too much free, then I always make chat with him

✓ whenever he is free, I always chat with him

The phrase 'too much free' is incorrect; 'free' does not require 'too much'. Also, 'make chat' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'chat'. The preposition 'with' is correctly used.

× Usually I chat with my friends in different things

✓ Usually I chat with my friends about different things

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here. The correct preposition to indicate the topic of conversation is 'about'.

× always she always insists me to do something like good everything

✓ she always insists that I do everything well

The pronoun 'me' is incorrectly used as the object of 'insists'. The correct structure is 'insists that I do'. Also, 'something like good everything' is unclear; 'everything well' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I always prefer to chat with a group of people rather than a single person

✓ I always prefer to chat with a group of people rather than a single person

This sentence is grammatically correct in terms of singular and plural usage; no correction needed.

× and it's give me much pleasure actually

✓ and it gives me much pleasure actually

The verb 'give' should be in the third person singular present tense 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× I prefer to talk with my friend in face to face

✓ I prefer to talk with my friend face to face

The phrase 'in face to face' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'face to face' without a preposition.

× that's makes me too much feelings too too much interesting

✓ that makes me feel very interested

The phrase 'that's makes' is incorrect; it should be 'that makes'. Also, 'too much feelings' is incorrect; 'feel' is the correct verb here. 'Too too much interesting' is ungrammatical; 'very interested' is appropriate.

× some topics which are not relevant for me and then I argue with my friend and about the topic

✓ some topics which are not relevant to me and then I argue with my friend about the topic

The phrase 'argue with my friend and about the topic' is redundant; 'argue with my friend about the topic' is correct. Also, 'relevant for me' should be 'relevant to me' (preposition correction).

× it's depend on time and it's depend on environment in which topic I I contact with my friends

✓ it depends on the time and the environment in which I contact my friends

The verb 'depend' should be 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'contact with my friends' is incorrect; 'contact my friends' is correct. The definite article 'the' is needed before 'time' and 'environment'.