Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use correct grammar and clearer sentence structure. Start with a direct answer, then explain your reason with linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

例: No, I don't like chatting with my friends because I am an introverted person. Therefore, I prefer spending time alone rather than socialising with others.

提案: Use clearer vocabulary and sentence structure. Start with a direct answer and then give specific examples using linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: I usually chat with my friends about academic subjects like geography, chemistry, and mathematics because we enjoy sharing knowledge on these topics.

提案: Provide a clear preference or explain that it depends on the situation. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid hesitation sounds.

例: I don't have a strong preference; it depends on the situation. Sometimes I enjoy chatting with a group, while other times I prefer talking to just one friend.

提案: Clarify your ideas and avoid unclear phrases like 'I'm a street guy'. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and naturally.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it feels more sincere and personal compared to chatting on social media.

提案: Use correct grammar and clearer sentence structure. Start with a direct answer and explain your attitude towards arguments with linking words.

例: I don't usually argue with my friends because I prefer to keep peace. Even if they want to argue, I try to stay calm and avoid conflicts.

× No, I don't chatting with my friends because I'm a I people so I always play with me alone.

✓ No, I don't chat with my friends because I'm a shy person so I always play alone.

The verb 'do' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. 'Don't chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'don't chat'. Also, 'a I people' is unclear and corrected to 'a shy person' for clarity and correctness.

× No, I don't chatting with my friends because I'm a I people so I always play with me alone.

✓ No, I don't chat with my friends because I'm a shy person so I always play alone.

The phrase 'play with me alone' is incorrect because 'me' is an object pronoun and does not fit here. It should be 'play alone' to indicate doing something by oneself.

× I like alone.

✓ I like being alone.

'I like alone' is incorrect because 'alone' is an adjective and needs a verb to connect it properly. 'I like being alone' correctly expresses the idea.

× I don't want to get a relationship with other people.

✓ I don't want to have a relationship with other people.

The verb 'get' is not typically used with 'relationship' in this context. 'Have a relationship' is the correct collocation.

× I always touch my friends often, uh, such as geography, chemistry, mathematics and uh, other knowledge.

✓ I always talk with my friends about subjects such as geography, chemistry, mathematics, and other knowledge.

The verb 'touch' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is likely 'talk'. Also, 'such as' should introduce examples of topics, not actions.

× I always chat with my friends about knowledge.

✓ I always chat with my friends about various topics.

'About knowledge' is vague and unnatural. It's better to specify 'various topics' or specific subjects.

× I don't care about uh, touch with a group of people or, or only one friend.

✓ I don't mind chatting with a group of people or just one friend.

'Touch with' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'chat' or 'talk'. Also, 'I don't care about' is better expressed as 'I don't mind' in this context.

× It depends on when I play with many people or only uh, uh, people, a people.

✓ It depends on whether I am with many people or just a few people.

The phrase 'people, a people' is unclear and incorrect. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper pronoun use.

× I prefer to communicate face to face.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face.

'Face-to-face' should be hyphenated when used as an adverb or adjective.

× I don't want to chat with other people because I'm a street guy.

✓ I don't want to chat with other people because I'm a shy guy.

'Street guy' is unclear and likely a mistranslation. 'Shy guy' fits the context better.

× I think it's a good way to come for communication.

✓ I think it's a good way to communicate.

'Come for communication' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'a good way to communicate'.

× Not your I, uh, also argue with my friends because they want to argue with me.

✓ No, I don't argue with my friends because they want to argue with me.

'Not your I' is incorrect and unclear. The sentence is corrected to a proper negative statement.