Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to use present tense consistently and avoid minor grammatical errors. Also, adding a linking phrase can improve coherence.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and stay connected with them. For instance, we often discuss our social media accounts and make plans for the weekend, which makes our conversations both fun and meaningful. I find that these chats are a great way to share ideas and strengthen our friendship.

提案: Your answer addresses the question well, but watch for subject-verb agreement and article usage. Using linking words like 'for example' is good; continue to develop your ideas with specific details.

例: I usually chat with my friends about various topics, but the most common subject is our assignments because most of us are students. For example, we often discuss college projects, share ideas, and help each other solve problems. This helps us stay on track and improve our work.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Avoid redundancy and ensure sentence structure is correct.

例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows me to interact with different friends at once. Mostly, I enjoy chatting with my college group since all my classmates are there, and we often talk about weekend plans and our assignments.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains tense inconsistency and filler words like 'uh'. Try to use present tense consistently and avoid fillers to sound more natural and confident.

例: To be honest, whenever I have a question or a query, I prefer to communicate face-to-face with my family members and friends. However, if I am in a relaxed mood and just want to use my extra time, I use social media to chat with them.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structure. Adding linking words can improve flow.

例: Yes, I only argue with my friends when we have to do group assignments or case studies because everyone has their own ideas. Therefore, we need to agree on one idea to complete the work, which sometimes leads to arguments.

× Yes, I really enjoyed chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and stay connected with them.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and stay connected with them.

The sentence mixes past tense 'enjoyed' with present tense 'helps'. Since the context is about a general habit, present tense 'enjoy' is appropriate to maintain consistency.

× For example, we often discuss college project, share ideas and help each other to solve the problems.

✓ For example, we often discuss college projects, share ideas and help each other to solve the problems.

The noun 'project' should be plural 'projects' to agree with the plural subject 'we' and the context of multiple assignments.

× This help us to stay on track and improve our work.

✓ This helps us to stay on track and improve our work.

The singular subject 'This' requires the singular verb form 'helps' to agree in number.

× I prefer to chat with a group of people because in a group we can chat with a different people and mostly I prefer to chat and then college group as they're all my classmates are there and we love to chat about weekend plans and our assignment as well.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because in a group we can chat with different people and mostly I prefer to chat in the college group as all my classmates are there and we love to chat about weekend plans and our assignments as well.

The phrase 'a different people' is incorrect; 'different people' is plural without 'a'. Also, 'then college group' should be 'in the college group' for correct preposition and article use. 'Assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to match the context.

× I like to communicate a face to face with my family members and friends.

✓ I like to communicate face to face with my family members and friends.

The phrase 'a face to face' is incorrect; 'face to face' is an adverbial phrase and does not require an article.

× So at that time I had an argue with my friends and college mates.

✓ So at that time I had an argument with my friends and college mates.

The verb 'argue' is incorrectly used as a noun. The correct noun form is 'argument'. Also, 'had an argue' is incorrect; it should be 'had an argument'.