Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words to improve coherence.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. Usually, we meet at a coffee shop where we drink coffee and catch up. Sometimes, we go shopping together and try on new clothes, especially on special occasions.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and contains repetition and grammatical mistakes. Focus on giving a clear topic sentence and support it with specific, relevant details. Avoid negative or confusing statements without explanation.

例: We usually talk about our personal lives, including our families and friendships. For example, I sometimes share my thoughts about my husband, and we discuss how to maintain good relationships with others.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains filler words. Try to express your preference clearly with a topic sentence, then explain why with specific reasons using linking words.

例: I prefer chatting with my best friend one-on-one because she understands me well. Although I enjoy group conversations sometimes, one-on-one talks allow us to discuss everything openly.

提案: Your answer is somewhat confusing and grammatically incorrect. Try to clearly state your preference and explain your reasons with coherent sentences and linking words.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can see the other person's facial expressions and emotions. This helps me understand their feelings better during our conversations.

提案: Your answer is good but contains some unnecessary words and minor errors. Try to avoid filler words and organize your answer with clear linking words to improve fluency.

例: No, I don't argue with my friends because we understand each other well. For example, my best friend and I often share our thoughts and feelings, which makes our conversations meaningful. We also solve problems together peacefully.

× Yes, I like when I went to uh, when I meet with my friends, we together drink of coffee and gossip umm the uh also we together we are go to the shop and we try new clothes.

✓ Yes, I like when I go to, uh, when I meet with my friends, we drink coffee together and gossip. Also, we go to the shop together and try new clothes.

The sentence incorrectly mixes past tense 'went' with present tense 'meet' and 'are go'. The correct tense to express habitual actions is the present tense. Also, 'drink of coffee' is incorrect; it should be 'drink coffee'. The phrase 'we together' is awkward and should be 'together we'. The verb 'are go' is incorrect; it should be 'go'. The sentence is corrected to use present tense consistently and proper word order.

× Yes, I like when I went to uh, when I meet with my friends, we together drink of coffee and gossip umm the uh also we together we are go to the shop and we try new clothes.

✓ Yes, I like when I go to, uh, when I meet with my friends, we drink coffee together and gossip. Also, we go to the shop together and try new clothes.

The phrase 'drink of coffee' is incorrect; the preposition 'of' is unnecessary here. The correct phrase is 'drink coffee'. Also, 'meet with my friends' is acceptable but 'meet my friends' is more natural. The preposition use is corrected to improve naturalness and grammatical accuracy.

× We really allow this umm awesome umm we some special day.

✓ We really allow this, umm, awesome. Umm, we have some special days.

The phrase 'we some special day' is missing a verb and the noun 'day' should be plural if referring to multiple occasions. Also, 'allow' is incorrect in this context; likely the intended verb is 'enjoy' or 'appreciate'. The correction adds the verb 'have' and pluralizes 'day' to 'days' to match the intended meaning.

× We usually chat about uh, my husband's because my husband is really bad person and my best friend, uh, hates uh, her.

✓ We usually chat about, uh, my husband because my husband is a really bad person and my best friend, uh, hates him.

The possessive form 'my husband's' is incorrectly used instead of the noun 'my husband'. Also, 'hates her' is incorrect because the pronoun should refer to 'my husband' (male), so 'him' is correct. The correction fixes the possessive misuse and pronoun gender error.

× We usually chat about uh, my husband's because my husband is really bad person and my best friend, uh, hates uh, her.

✓ We usually chat about, uh, my husband because my husband is a really bad person and my best friend, uh, hates him.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrect when referring to 'my husband', who is male. The correct pronoun is 'him'. This correction ensures pronoun agreement in gender.

× I prefer both of you, but uh, I enjoy chat uh, only A1 friend because a friend, umm uh, friend, my best friend, uh. Understand me and we talk about everything.

✓ I prefer both, but uh, I enjoy chatting with only one friend because my best friend understands me and we talk about everything.

The phrase 'both of you' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'both' referring to options. 'Enjoy chat' should be 'enjoy chatting'. 'Only A1 friend' is unclear and likely means 'only one friend'. The sentence 'friend, my best friend, uh. Understand me' is fragmented and should be combined. The correction improves pronoun use, verb form, and sentence structure.

× I prefer both of you, but uh, I enjoy chat uh, only A1 friend because a friend, umm uh, friend, my best friend, uh. Understand me and we talk about everything.

✓ I prefer both, but uh, I enjoy chatting with only one friend because my best friend understands me and we talk about everything.

After the verb 'enjoy', the gerund form '-ing' is required, so 'chat' should be 'chatting'. This correction follows the rule that certain verbs are followed by gerunds.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I want to look for her face also I want to umm looking for their emotions and when I want when I speak to her and he are sometimes shock and I want it.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I want to see her face and also I want to observe her emotions. When I speak to her, she is sometimes shocked and I want that.

The phrase 'look for her face' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'see her face'. 'Looking for their emotions' is incorrect; it should be 'observe her emotions'. The sentence 'he are sometimes shock' is grammatically incorrect and unclear; corrected to 'she is sometimes shocked'. The correction fixes preposition misuse and clarifies meaning.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I want to look for her face also I want to umm looking for their emotions and when I want when I speak to her and he are sometimes shock and I want it.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I want to see her face and also I want to observe her emotions. When I speak to her, she is sometimes shocked and I want that.

The pronouns 'their' and 'he' are inconsistent with the singular subject 'her'. They should be 'her' and 'she' respectively to maintain pronoun agreement. The correction ensures consistent and correct pronoun use.

× No, I don't because she understands me well and we can talk about anything. Penalty.

✓ No, I don't because she understands me well and we can talk about anything. For example, my best friend and I often share our thoughts and feelings which makes our conversations very meaningful.

The word 'Penalty' is out of context and likely a misused word or filler. It is replaced with a proper example sentence to clarify meaning. The modal verb 'can' is used correctly here, so no change needed for modal verbs.