Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like chatting with friends?
受験者
Yes, I like chatting with friends more than you hang out with friends because I'm introvert and I like try umm, staying alone but sometime hang out. And uh instead of hang out I like chatting with friends on social media.
試験官
What do you usually chat about with friends?
受験者
Umm, as introvert, uh, I don't usually chat with my friends on social media Also like you know, I am introvert and I really want to be alone over all the time and when I chat with my friends it's like umm, it's make it's like uh.
試験官
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
受験者
I am really envious of someone who have a group of people like a group of friends. I don't usually have a group of friends when I know with someone I know with someone like no group or people like just one people and keep connecting with that people in my life.
試験官
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
受験者
Umm, as I mentioned above, I am introvert and most, uh, most of the time I really take my time alone. That's why I like social media. But when it's needed, I like, uh, I had to face to face, like interview or like when hang out with your friends and family reunion, you know, like that.
試験官
Do you argue with friends?
受験者
Yes, of course. Who? Who don't argue with friends. Can you tell me? Yeah, sometimes we fight. We argue when like something she said and something I said. When we don't agree with each other, we argue and but we call again later.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
スコア: 55.0提案: သင်၏အဖြေသည် သဘာဝကျပြီး ထိရောက်မှုရှိရန် ပိုမိုရိုးရှင်းစွာ ပြောဆိုရန် လိုအပ်သည်။ မိမိကိုယ်ကို "introvert" ဟု ဖော်ပြခြင်းကောင်းသော်လည်း စကားလုံးများကို ပိုမိုတိကျစွာ အသုံးပြု၍ စကားလုံးများကို ပိုမိုချုပ်ဆိုပါ။ ဥပမာအားဖြင့် "I prefer chatting with friends on social media because I am an introvert and enjoy spending time alone, but I sometimes like to hang out." ဟု ပြောဆိုနိုင်ပါသည်။
例: I prefer chatting with friends on social media because I am an introvert and enjoy spending time alone, but I sometimes like to hang out with them.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
スコア: 40.0提案: အဖြေသည် မကြာခဏ ပြန်လည်ထပ်ခါးခြင်းများနှင့် မပြည့်စုံသော အကြောင်းအရာများ ပါဝင်သည်။ ပိုမိုတိကျသော အကြောင်းအရာများနှင့် ဆက်စပ်သော စကားလုံးများကို အသုံးပြု၍ ပိုမိုသေချာစွာ ပြောဆိုပါ။ ဥပမာအားဖြင့် "I usually chat about our daily lives or interests, but since I am introverted, I don't chat very often." ဟု ပြောဆိုနိုင်ပါသည်။
例: I usually chat about our daily lives or interests, but since I am introverted, I don't chat very often.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
スコア: 50.0提案: အဖြေသည် စကားလုံးများကို ပိုမိုတိကျစွာ အသုံးပြု၍ ပိုမိုရှင်းလင်းစေရန် လိုအပ်သည်။ ပိုမိုသေချာသော စကားလုံးများနှင့် သက်ဆိုင်ရာ linking words များကို အသုံးပြုပါ။ ဥပမာအားဖြင့် "I prefer chatting with only one friend because I don't have a group of friends, and I like to maintain close connections with individuals." ဟု ပြောဆိုနိုင်ပါသည်။
例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I don't have a group of friends, and I like to maintain close connections with individuals.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
スコア: 60.0提案: အဖြေသည် သဘာဝကျပြီး ပိုမိုစနစ်တကျ ပြောဆိုရန် လိုအပ်သည်။ Linking words များကို အသုံးပြု၍ အကြောင်းအရာများကို ပိုမိုချုပ်ဆိုပါ။ ဥပမာအားဖြင့် "I prefer communicating via social media because I am introverted and enjoy my alone time. However, I communicate face-to-face when necessary, such as during interviews or family gatherings." ဟု ပြောဆိုနိုင်ပါသည်။
例: I prefer communicating via social media because I am introverted and enjoy my alone time. However, I communicate face-to-face when necessary, such as during interviews or family gatherings.
Do you argue with friends?
スコア: 65.0提案: အဖြေသည် ပိုမိုစနစ်တကျ ပြောဆိုရန် လိုအပ်သည်။ Redundancy များကို လျှော့ချပြီး ပိုမိုတိကျသော စကားလုံးများကို အသုံးပြုပါ။ ဥပမာအားဖြင့် "Yes, I do argue with friends sometimes when we have different opinions, but we usually make up and stay friends." ဟု ပြောဆိုနိုင်ပါသည်။
例: Yes, I do argue with friends sometimes when we have different opinions, but we usually make up and stay friends.
文法
× I am really envious of someone who have a group of people like a group of friends.
✓ I am really envious of someone who has a group of people like a group of friends.
The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'someone'. This is a third person singular issue where the verb must end with 's' in the present tense.
× I don't usually have a group of friends when I know with someone I know with someone like no group or people like just one people and keep connecting with that people in my life.
✓ I don't usually have a group of friends; when I know someone, I don't have a group or many people, just one person, and I keep connecting with that person in my life.
The word 'people' is plural and should not be used to refer to a single individual. 'One people' is incorrect; it should be 'one person'. Also, 'that people' should be 'that person' to match singular reference. This is a singular and plural issue.
× I like try umm, staying alone but sometime hang out.
✓ I like to try, umm, staying alone but sometimes hang out.
The verb 'like' is usually followed by 'to' + verb or verb + -ing. Here, 'like try' is incorrect; it should be 'like to try'. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' as an adverb meaning occasionally. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and adverbs.
× Who? Who don't argue with friends.
✓ Who? Who doesn't argue with friends?
The pronoun 'who' is singular here, so the verb should be 'doesn't' instead of 'don't'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and subject-verb agreement.
× When we don't agree with each other, we argue and but we call again later.
✓ When we don't agree with each other, we argue, but we call again later.
The conjunction 'and but' is incorrect; only one conjunction should be used. Also, the sentence structure needs correction for clarity. This is a verb + -ing form and conjunction usage issue.
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